Comments | smilesofalover: One Final Song

candielover93 in smilesofalover

One Final Song

Dec 01, 2008 23:01

One Final Song
Yoochun/Changmin
Angst
PG-13
1,634 words.
It's always hard writing a song for the person you love, especially when you're trying to say goodbye.

( The song reminds him of separation, of tears, of heartbreak, everything that he shouldn’t be feeling now when all the things he’s been dreaming of are coming true. )

pairing: yoochun/changmin, fandom: dbsk (2003-2009), length: oneshot, focus: yoochun, rating: pg-13, genre: angst

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candielover93 December 2 2008, 08:40:18 UTC

yes, definitely poor yoochun.

thanks for reading! (:

fadedandinsane December 2 2008, 07:41:18 UTC

oh. that was. heart wrenching and beautiful.
TT-TT

♥

candielover93 December 2 2008, 08:41:04 UTC

thank you ♥ i was trying for the heart-wrenching emotion when i wrote this.

thanks for reading! (:

zhun_ai_lee December 2 2008, 07:41:34 UTC

ouch........
its really hurt......
good job........
^^

candielover93 December 2 2008, 08:41:32 UTC

thanks for reading! (:

lady_akira December 2 2008, 08:17:29 UTC

oh, i was anticipating the part with Changmin's reaction to the song but i guess it must just stay in our imagination. anyway, sad but lovely yoomin <3

candielover93 December 2 2008, 08:39:16 UTC

i was actually writing that part until i remembered that this was a yoochun-focused fic xD; i ended up deleting it since he can't exactly see changmin's reaction if he isn't there, right?

thanks for reading! ♥

kurogoma December 2 2008, 08:17:32 UTC

so very good, and so so tragic.

;_____;

the finality of the last line makes my heart hurts.
thinking that he is going to be all alone when he finally really leaves.

♥

candielover93 December 2 2008, 08:44:19 UTC

ah, thank you for the compliments! (: yes, when he finally leaves, no one is going to be there for him. i had to make the last line definite since well, he's dying, and won't be coming back.

thanks for reading! ♥