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smoke_baby

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Mar 18, 2007 17:04

Title: Over my shoulder
Fandom: Four Brothers
Rating: PG-13
Charater(s)/Pairing: Bobby Mercer/Jack Mercer
Summary: Character death, major!! movie spoiler
Warnings: Countless nights and a guitar.
Word Count: ~1180

( I'm gonna be a star someday. )

fanfic, bobby/jack, challenge

Comments 17

sweetebonyrose March 18 2007, 17:06:31 UTC

Heartbreakingly beautiful! My eyes started to water at that last sentence.

smoke_baby March 19 2007, 20:18:43 UTC

Oh my, that's really a compliment! Thank you ♥

almost_eatable March 18 2007, 17:26:41 UTC

Awww. That was beautiful. ;~;

I love your icon, as well. <3

smoke_baby March 19 2007, 20:19:40 UTC

Aw, thank you twice! :>

niprhidel March 19 2007, 00:09:05 UTC

So very very good....great at capturing the emotion.

smoke_baby March 19 2007, 20:21:47 UTC

Wow, thank you!

agape_eternal March 19 2007, 01:40:58 UTC

So sad but really beautiful :)

smoke_baby March 19 2007, 20:22:27 UTC

I didn't even realize it turned out quite that sad until I read all your comments, oh my! Thanks :>

agape_eternal March 19 2007, 23:08:27 UTC

Well it's good sad lol :D

lebeat5 March 19 2007, 08:10:17 UTC

This so sad,but great.

also I hardly ever find fics where jack
is dead in them. everyone it seem keeps him alive, but who can blame them right;}

smoke_baby March 19 2007, 20:20:41 UTC

Ahaha, I certainly can't blame them! I was crying in the cinema, we all wanted him to stay alive! Thanks ♥