Last schmutty chapter, y'all! Then I'll post the epilogue on Christmas Eve, and this thing will be done. I don't know whether to feel happy or sad about that!
*snort* Sawyer walking around the house wearing just an apron? How is Jack supposed to focus on, well, anything? He has a whole hell of a lost more restraint than me, that's for damn sure. ;)
It's very interesting that you've chosen to have them be each others first, because you don't get that a lot in Jack/Sawyer fic (maybe on Jack's end but rarely on Sawyer's), and it certainly lets new things be brought to the fic, like the fact that Sawyer is so completely wiped out and speechless when it's over, as well as the fact that Jack had the presence of mind to ask Sawyer first.
I'm sad to see this coming to a close, but you've done a wonderful job with it Allie. It's an incredible fic with so many wonderful parts to it. :) You should be so proud of the job you've done and the world you've managed to create for our boys.
Hee, it says something about how twisted I am that I saw that line as a pun. *smooches you*
I am SO, SO glad you've enjoyed it! It's completely consumed my brain for two months, and if not for the hand-holding you've given me, I might not have gotten through it. So you deserve a lot of the credit! ♥
Um, can I first timidly say that I love it that you loved the rimming? Because I've never written it before, and I felt like such a virgin trying to get it right! And I love how you say they "talked tactics," because that describes it perfectly and I hadn't thought of it that way. What you said about the conversation by the fire was so well-said, and it helped me see more clearly how I wanted to say things in the epilogue, so I edited a bit after I read this. You've clarified things for me several times, and though you say you're tired and you seem to think you ramble (silly girl!), you have really given me a lot of great help. In a story like this, it's been so helpful to have you and some others commenting on each part because it's helped me edit later parts to better show what I meant to show. I hope that makes sense; what I'm saying is that you've been an angel and I am so grateful to you! Thank you, for this feedback and for everything! ♥
Those first two paragraphs, the opening so tender and then the second so achingly in character with how far Sawyer has come and how far he has yet to go.
And you know, for all you've said you had to drag things out with 10k words of smut at the end, this doesn't feel extra or gratuitious at all; it's necessary to wind the story down. Which is a tremendous accomplishment.
Yay, you liked it! Even with the rimming! Oh, I was so nervous about writing that, not because I don't think it's hot (I really do, when it's done right!) but because I'd never tried writing it before. Jack was determined, though. ;) And thank you for saying the enormous amount of sex in the last few chapters doesn't seem gratuitous; I was afraid of bombarding people with too much of a good thing! So not only did this feedback make me blush and smile, it also made me give a big sigh of relief. Thank you so much! ♥
wow! that was awesome, seriously. it was way hot, and at the same time we see the feelings that are shared through actions more than words and it's absolutely lovely.
I had to laugh at the smartass that is Sawyer in his apron, and also at the firecrackers, that was all so much fun.
I love that Sawyer says he's superstitious, and that line about making peace with the past was very touching. It's also wonderful that Jack lets faith (and fate) take more place in his life too. beautiful story and I can't wait to read the ending!
I want an icon of Sawyer in that apron, seriously. It's too bad we can't upload what's in our brains to the hard drive, huh? And poor Jack, he tries to be a good ol' boy so he can bond with Sawyer but he's just clueless about it. ;) Thank you for saying that about faith and fate; I think the story turned out to be about both of them coming to terms with those big, scary concepts. Thank you so much for reading and feedbacking even while on vacation! *gives you great big Christmas hugs*
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It's very interesting that you've chosen to have them be each others first, because you don't get that a lot in Jack/Sawyer fic (maybe on Jack's end but rarely on Sawyer's), and it certainly lets new things be brought to the fic, like the fact that Sawyer is so completely wiped out and speechless when it's over, as well as the fact that Jack had the presence of mind to ask Sawyer first.
I'm sad to see this coming to a close, but you've done a wonderful job with it Allie. It's an incredible fic with so many wonderful parts to it. :) You should be so proud of the job you've done and the world you've managed to create for our boys.
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Hee, it says something about how twisted I am that I saw that line as a pun. *smooches you*
I am SO, SO glad you've enjoyed it! It's completely consumed my brain for two months, and if not for the hand-holding you've given me, I might not have gotten through it. So you deserve a lot of the credit! ♥
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Those first two paragraphs, the opening so tender and then the second so achingly in character with how far Sawyer has come and how far he has yet to go.
And you know, for all you've said you had to drag things out with 10k words of smut at the end, this doesn't feel extra or gratuitious at all; it's necessary to wind the story down. Which is a tremendous accomplishment.
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I had to laugh at the smartass that is Sawyer in his apron, and also at the firecrackers, that was all so much fun.
I love that Sawyer says he's superstitious, and that line about making peace with the past was very touching. It's also wonderful that Jack lets faith (and fate) take more place in his life too. beautiful story and I can't wait to read the ending!
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I'll be back....
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