Chapter 16

Dec 22, 2006 13:18

Last schmutty chapter, y'all! Then I'll post the epilogue on Christmas Eve, and this thing will be done. I don't know whether to feel happy or sad about that!

Chapter 16 )

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hkath December 23 2006, 18:59:15 UTC
Awww, speechless Sawyer makes me all squeaky :)

Merry almost Xmas!

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alliecat8 December 24 2006, 01:42:17 UTC
I am so proud that Sawyer made you squeaky. You're cute when you're squeaky! *smooches you*

Merry almost Xmas to you!!!

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speedcat93 December 28 2006, 20:56:48 UTC
Sawyer speechless because of mind blowing sex, wow! that's a nice picture and I've got a very good imagination... My fav. line "then his gaze focuses on Jack’s and he cries out once, twice, and as they connect with eyes and bodies and souls he cries out one more time. Their connection is so deep and so much more than sex. I almost have the impression of intruding in their intimacy. *sighs and wishes they'll never leave this fireplace* bye ;-)

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alliecat8 December 28 2006, 23:52:25 UTC
I almost have the impression of intruding in their intimacy.

I take it as a huge compliment that they felt that "real" to you! And I'm glad it came across as being about more than sex, because it really was. It was about trust, about Sawyer letting Jack in in every way. Metaphors abound in this fic, don't they? ;) You are so wonderful for faithfully feedbacking on every chapter, and I appreciate you lots and LOTS! Thank you! ♥

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