I'm wearing the smile you gave me ( Chapter 4)

Dec 09, 2011 23:20

Sorry it took so long, Major Writers block But its here now YAY!! please, any criticism or comments are appreciated!

Title: I'm Wearing the smile you gave me ( Chapter 4)
Pairings: Anthony/Ian
Rating/Warnings: PG

Summary:  What is Anthony Thinking? How Will Anthony react to Ian Kissing him?Author's Notes: Sorry Guys, had Major writers block!
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saint_elsewhere December 10 2011, 03:36:25 UTC
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. No. I will not accept FIN. You must write more!

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smoshy_love December 10 2011, 03:41:26 UTC
I Will! Just the end of the chapter, So Glad you liked it ! :)

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michaelangelo24 December 10 2011, 05:20:24 UTC
I loved the innocent build up to the kiss. Just having them goof around was cute. :)

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smoshy_love December 10 2011, 14:09:17 UTC
Thanks :) I love when they goof around, so I mean, I had to add it!

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name_undecided December 10 2011, 05:37:02 UTC
My goodness! I really happened to enjoy this. A lot. The second paragraph isn't confusing, and I thought it was really creative!

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smoshy_love December 10 2011, 14:10:18 UTC
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it. And okay, thanks for the feedback about the paragraph! I thought it would confuse some.

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vespiquen8 December 10 2011, 05:50:57 UTC
Awwwwwww Cute. ;)

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smoshy_love December 10 2011, 14:10:28 UTC
Thanks for reading :)

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trulyemofreak December 11 2011, 09:49:25 UTC
at first i thought anthony was gonna get all homophobic, so i'm much happier now. I can let out the breathe i've been holding since i read chapter 3.
And i loved the way you did the second paragraph. It was unexpected and creative, giving the reader another point of veiw for a second. Original!

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smoshy_love December 11 2011, 22:25:21 UTC
Haha! Well it wouldn't be much of a ianthony story if Anthony was homophobic, now would it? ;) Thanks for reading <3

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