for: sn_exchange

Aug 27, 2010 16:06

From: hcyanide
Title: Sky Turn Red
Rating: PG-15+
Summary:The prompt: Sasuke and Naruto in a world where Danzo Shimura fails to convince Itachi that murdering the Uchiha clan will prevent another war.
Warnings: Violence, swearing, ridiculous length gah
A/N: …I really, really hope you like this and I’m sorry I couldn’t do justice to your amazing prompt ( Read more... )

summer 2010, rating: pg-15, submission: fic

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itzakukulkan August 29 2010, 01:03:14 UTC
This is a really good story. You managed to keep the tension throughout the plot. I liked that this story would have to Naruto and Sasuke not as irreparably damaged. They have suffered, but not so much (especially Sasuke). And the end was perfect. Thanks for sharing.

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hcyanide December 28 2010, 09:08:00 UTC
'...Naruto and Sasuke not as irreparably damaged.'

Oh man, they're damaged enough in canon, I don't think I could inflict more pain on them in an alternate reality too. XD

Thanks for reading and commenting! adklf~ ♥

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aamyra September 1 2010, 17:58:47 UTC
HOLY CRAP.

THAT WAS AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGG. Holy shit. I think you created an amazing "What If" for all of us. What's the other word for this? Alternate universe canon? Alternate canon? HAHA, idk! I could totally see this happening if fate had set this for from the very beginning.

Ah. And I totally fell in love with Sasuke in this story. He had to learn so much.

Oh, by the way. I hate Danzou. What a douchebag.

And Naruto! He was such a dear throughout the whole thing. I just want to like, hug him or something. And yeah, everything was believable right till the end-- which wasn't really the end, if you ask me. A beginning is more fitting. Fantastic job!

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hcyanide December 28 2010, 09:10:04 UTC
'...the end-- which wasn't really the end, if you ask me.'

WAAHHH~ that was exactly what I was going for, you have no idea how very happy it makes me that you thought that! XD /dances

Thanks so much! ♥

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iluvjobronobama October 5 2010, 00:27:18 UTC
This was one hell of a story!

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hcyanide December 28 2010, 09:10:50 UTC
Thanks for reading and commenting! :3 I'm very glad you liked it~! x3

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karit November 9 2010, 13:16:47 UTC
Wow... angsty and dramatic and Naruto and Sasuke are ♥!!! Thank you for writing it, it's wonderful!

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hcyanide December 28 2010, 09:12:05 UTC
Meehee~ x3 Naruto and Sasuke together will always be angsty and dramatic, methinks, ahaha. :3 Thanks for reading! ♥

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GORGEOUS a_windybreeze January 24 2011, 22:50:44 UTC
Okay. To be honest I was a little doubtful when I began reading this, because I stray pretty far away from this sort of fic (alternate canon?) but I feel guilty for being so dubious now because that was lovely ( ... )

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