Okay, it might have something to do with my listening to Pippin's sad song from RotK, but this is making me all melancholy. I wish I smoked! With Snape, in the cold.
Thank you for this lovely snippet. The imageries are well-crafted and set out the atmosphere perfectly. And that Harry's perception towards Snape changed for such a small event is perfect.
I hate smoking, but damn, I love this little story. The weird thing is that I could picture Snape smoking even before I read this. I don't know why but it does suit him somehow.
And you've just proofed (again) that a "story" doesn't have to be a novel to touch a reader.
Wow, this was a very pleasant read. Harry seems more like someone who has gone through all he has in this little snippet than in anything I've read in a long time.
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Again, lovely.
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And you've just proofed (again) that a "story" doesn't have to be a novel to touch a reader.
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Yay to you!
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Smoking does indeed make people seem human. I like the way you use it here (and see such smut potential in the last line ;) )
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