Comments | snapsparagus: Try It Again (Part 3)

snapsparagus

Try It Again (Part 3)

Sep 04, 2008 23:24

Here's Part 3 of my story, Try It Again. Thanks much for the reviews on Parts 1 & 2.

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try it again

Comments 22

elzed September 5 2008, 09:27:41 UTC

Ack! Nice way of breaking it to the ice queen, eh?

I sense a change of heart on the horizon... ;)

snapsparagus September 19 2008, 23:07:00 UTC

Thanks for commenting. I think the change of heart is indeed fast approaching.... :)

jassylou September 5 2008, 15:47:35 UTC

ITA with el and I'm loving every word.

"The Ice Queen" is melting but I think Ryan has a little thawing of his own to do *nods*

Excited!!! Update soon....Right?.:)

aleunamtreppel September 5 2008, 16:03:09 UTC

Great update. Thanks. Please more soon.

snapsparagus September 20 2008, 01:01:07 UTC

Thanks for reading & commenting! :)

brandywine421 September 5 2008, 18:33:26 UTC

I'm still enjoying this muchly! ♥

snapsparagus September 20 2008, 01:01:44 UTC

I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for commenting. :)

fredsmith518 September 5 2008, 19:43:24 UTC

very neat plot device having Kirsten overhear, oh and what you had her overhear was painful in the extreme

snapsparagus September 20 2008, 01:02:15 UTC

Thanks for reading & commenting...I appreciate it! :)