Comments | snapsparagus: Try It Again (Part 6)

snapsparagus

Try It Again (Part 6)

Oct 25, 2008 21:38

Here's Part 6. Thanks for the comments - previous parts can be found at my journal. A little language in this one, nothing major. :)

( Try It Again (Part 6) )

try it again

Comments 18

beachtree October 26 2008, 10:55:05 UTC

I know I'm going backwards, which is the story of my life, but better one direction than none at all, right ( ... )

beachtree October 26 2008, 10:55:56 UTC

Btw, I love the description of Seth through Sandy's eyes. That unpleasant image is pretty much spot on!

willwork4dean October 26 2008, 17:15:48 UTC

Go, Ryan! Kick some ass!

I mean, um...I hope Ryan stops to consider the ramifications of his actions.

Loving this fic!

snapsparagus October 26 2008, 18:52:57 UTC

I seriously laughed out loud when I read your comment - that's *exactly* how I feel. You nailed it. :)

Thanks for reading & commenting!

mirella67 October 26 2008, 23:14:09 UTC

Good story. I have to admit, as much as I think Ryan should be covering his own ass and not fighting, I like that he wants to stick up for Seth. So...go, Ryan!

smc36 October 27 2008, 12:35:29 UTC

Seth/Ryan time is awesome.
I'm glad you liked this chapter! It's good. I like it, too. :>)