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[snickers53187]

If my heart being broken makes me a lover

Comments

[jamtb422]

"and you refuse everything i have
you are worst than your own heartache
for you made me this way"

Perhaps you shoudl stop insuting my best friend so much because you two didn't work out.. and simply get over the breakup.

[thesilentpain]

Most prefer a "Roses are Red, Violets are blue" type dedication poem ...but...meh...hostility and vengance are pretty catchy.

[anonymous]

"as he drips with what you crave the most
and it drags you down with him
into the thing you hate the most"

I LOVE that line......Not because it relates to jess or anything but it relates to everyone.....you really captured something.....i really really really love that line
-Jackie

[snickers53187]

thank you jackie, that means a lot to me that you really liked at least that line of my poem, i hope you enjoyed the rest of it too. i'm glad someone is able to post a positive comment on here.