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Fancition: "It's never 'Just Business' " / The Musketeers

May 05, 2015 18:25

Title: It's never "Just Business"
Author: Snobantiker
Fandom: The Musketeers
Rating: Hell if I know... pg-13 I guess? Nothing serious, though
Pairing: Captain Treville/OFC
Disclaimer: Don't be silly, nothing is mine
Spoilers: Season 2, mildly
Words: 2.234
Summary: A spy at the French court is uncovered, a lady-in-waiting with a connection to ( Read more... )

musketeers, my fanfiction, treville

Comments 5

emerald_happy May 5 2015, 21:06:23 UTC

Hahaha what drama! This made me giggle in places. Thanks for putting Lemay in it. Now I want to write adorable tipsy Lemay and Treville sharing their misadventures in trying to find true love.

snobantiker May 5 2015, 21:11:51 UTC

Thank you XD I am glad you liked it (and don't hate me for it *g*)

Of course Lemay is in it. He is awesome and should be in every fic!

*lol* Feel free to write about those misadventures in "my" version of the musketeers universe ;) Hell, I wouldn't even mind if someone ELSE finished that story. I mean, I really want to read it myself, that's why I wrote even that part! ( I would like two or three things to be put into the story, though, but that's negotiable :p ...)

emerald_happy May 6 2015, 05:54:09 UTC

I struggle to find the time to write and don't really enjoy it that much. I'll stick to throwing plot bunnies out there though.

But thanks for the offer :D

asthenie_vd May 13 2015, 22:02:29 UTC

What Michelle didn’t realize at that moment and what Treville probably would never admit to anyone was just how many lonely or sleepless nights he must have spent studying her letter and her few precious notes over and over again.

Ouch, my poor heart! ;___; I can just imagine him being so happy about having found someone that he'd treasure every keepsake he had of them, considering himself blessed to possess it. Poor Treville, so in love, only to be so betrayed.

But I love how you had Athos offer some comfort. ♥ And that Dr Lemay still lives in this story! *sigh*

Also,

He hardly knew anything about the woman that lay there, not even her name.

Oh, how mean! I'm weirdly glad she wasn't actually buried under someone else's name, that would have been too cruel.

snobantiker May 14 2015, 06:33:38 UTC

Ouch, my poor heart! ;___; I can just imagine him being so happy about having found someone that he'd treasure every keepsake he had of them, considering himself blessed to possess it. Poor Treville, so in love, only to be so betrayed.
That - as well as the blushing - is easily my favorite part of the story. Treville is sooo cute there ^^ But he can't have nice things for long, not with those writers out there, can he?

But I love how you had Athos offer some comfort.
YES! I didn't want him to be alone there, when she dies and I think Athos is the only one of the musketeers that has the connection with Treville (being the second in command) that he would comfort him. You know, I read the Athos/Treville Fanfic that fred wrote and while I still don't ship them, the friendship is growing on me.

And that Dr Lemay still lives in this story!I'll always use as much Lemay as possible. For context, the story would play mostly in between of the seasons, the ending must be a couple of weeks after the episode when Constance first came to ( ... )