BSG Fic...

May 29, 2008 00:14

Title:  Instinct (part 2.5 of 2.5)
Author:  snoopy0917
Rating:  MA
Pairing:  Bill Adama/Laura Roslin
Spoilers:  a small one for He That Believeth in Me

A/N:  LJ is being annoying and making me break this up...
Part one can be found here or here
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prettypinkdork May 29 2008, 07:38:18 UTC
I like the idea that this story is sitting in some tattered five star notebook somewhere. This was hot. Maybe the best A/R smut I've read in months.

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snoopy0917 May 30 2008, 02:37:07 UTC
it is indeed. in fact the notebook is so tattered that the cover just literally fell off last weekend. luckily it's also almost full. (I'm too OCD to just buy a new one before it's full. ahhh writing superstitions.)

I'm really glad you liked it. this chapter just about ate my brain.

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gypsygem81 May 29 2008, 12:48:22 UTC
This was gorgeous! Thank you :)

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snoopy0917 May 30 2008, 02:37:26 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :)

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stiletto_freek May 29 2008, 13:18:38 UTC
WoW..and AGAIN..your muse and you...you are now ENTITLED to writing. Seriously.

This was FABULOUS. And not just smut part (albeit..it WAS DA BEST) I loved every part of this.

The laughter faded eventually and they lay together. It felt natural. Comfortable. Like they should have been doing this the whole time. Like they shouldn’t have waited so long.
And, really, WHY did they haven't done this a long time ago?

Thank you. And ::pulls out chocolate:: THIS is for your muse..for being so awesome.
:)

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snoopy0917 May 30 2008, 02:42:52 UTC
I still contend my muse needs a boyfriend. CLEARLY it got a tad overstimulated...

well, I'm contending that they've been doing it for a while now. And I'm going to keep contending it until they explicitly tell me differently. Like until one of them says something like, "Hey, you know what we should have been doing? Sex. Let's get on that..." But then, my muse likes her delusional world. I may have to talk her off the edge. she's thinking about making it a series. i may have to have a bit of a chat w/ her. :)

I'm glad you liked it!

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stiletto_freek May 30 2008, 09:28:34 UTC
Overstimulated muse is good muse..(as far as reader are concerned anyway)

So..no boyfriends until we have series finished.
lol

I think they've been doing the SEX part for some time now. I am sure of that.

delusional world is good world..you can imagine all you want..like your own Admiral and /or President.

whispers to muse: 'series is good. Don't listen to the weird lady. She is delusional'
Muse said that there will be series.

And..it si me WHO IS GLAD. Trust me.
:)

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snoopy0917 May 31 2008, 04:45:17 UTC
I have a hard time believing that they've been living together and been COMPELTELY celibate. but then I have a terribly dirty mind.

*sigh* stupid muse. why do you never listen to me! lol

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lullabymoon May 29 2008, 20:59:11 UTC
Gah! Dude, that was hot. I'm too speechless to say anything else about it at the moment except that I loved it. Awesome job.

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snoopy0917 May 30 2008, 02:39:40 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I think I oversexed my brain to a very bad degree writing it. *evil grin*

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pangea_maru June 3 2008, 01:52:46 UTC
Holy crap, but this was HAWT!!! I just got around to reading this whole story tonight; I have no idea how I'll ever get to sleep now.

I love your style and think you definitely understand the essence of these characters; this is one of the best fics I've read in quite a while. I seriously look forward to reading more of your work! :-) :-)

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snoopy0917 June 3 2008, 03:48:07 UTC
Wow, what a lovely thing to say! I will admit, this one got away from me a bit. Not necessarily in a BAD way but still...it's good to know that it works.

I have ideas to continue it. I'm already playing around with something...problem is I'm now convinced that RDM is going to break my (our) heats in 2 weeks and leave us in a terrible place for the hiatus. Which would ruin my plans!

Sorry about the sleepless night. I have chronic insomnia myself...it causes smutty things to happen *evil grin*

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