k so since im new i guess i should write sumthin huh?

[standaloneman]

i wrote this last night...

Comments

[stargzn_nemesis]

I really like this.

You said you would like some criticism...correct?

I am just asking out of curiousity...Do you mispell words as a point, or are you just not a great speller. This is not meant to be offensive, as I am not a very good speller either. :) <3

[standaloneman]

its on purpose. i write how i talk. :D

[stargzn_nemesis]

Do you have a messanger? Yahoo or AIM? If so, IM me if you'd like.

AIM: stargzn nemesis
Yahoo: lonely_and_torn

[_noxlastxkiss_]

That was good. I usually don't like poems that rhyme, but that's because one of my old friends would come up with these second grade level ones about him wanting to kill himself, but that's beside the point. I liked your poem. Keep writting. :-D

[standaloneman]

kewl thx.
er..is there any that dont?
ive only heard of the ones that do..
besides haiku.
lol that rhymes too. lol that did as well.
ill stop now:D

[_noxlastxkiss_]

I guee they all do to some extent, but I think it also has to do with the topic and how it's written. Your's was good though. Most def. not on such a low level as that.

[_noxlastxkiss_]

guess*

[stargzn_nemesis]

YAY!! My friends like each other!!! *giggles*

[standaloneman]

lol