i had originally started writing thinking about self-loathing egomaniacs... something we're all familiar with. i wrote 'disillusionment' at the top of a page and this came out... i later changed the title to what seemed more appropriate. it's not as negative as it sounds. it's just that sometimes... sometimes i worry
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looking for some feedback on something i wrote. constructive criticism, that is... thanks. eh, forget 'constructive criticism,' be brutally honest
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