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lilmoonbunny16 November 5 2010, 00:18:20 UTC
YAY!!!! an update!!!! I was so excited to see a new chapter!! I love the interaction between Rossi and Gideon--the contrast between them is spot on!

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sodakey November 6 2010, 19:10:01 UTC
Thank you. :) Hope it continues to... work? Guh. I'm trying to keep the expositiony explosion interesting. Heaven help us all.

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jujuberry136 November 5 2010, 01:07:18 UTC
Yay! Reid's totally not crazy and now he knows it, hooray!

Loved the Rossi and Gideon interaction and the team is getting close to cracking the case, all very good things.

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sodakey November 6 2010, 19:12:10 UTC
Reid is indeed taking his steps toward sane... mostly. ;)

(Pleased the Rossi and Gideon stuff came across okay.)

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water_soter November 5 2010, 02:51:24 UTC
Interesting how Rossi shifted gears in response to Gideon's reaction. And the plot is thickening. I wonder if the unsub purposely chose to target Reid, since he and Gideon where so close. And, huh, someone that has that much interest in Gideon, could it be the son?

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sodakey November 6 2010, 19:15:32 UTC
Time will tell what our nefarious unsub is up to, my friend. Time will tell. ;)

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princesslacus November 5 2010, 04:10:33 UTC
Loved Gideon at the end of this chapter. Epic. I love you and this story! XD

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sodakey November 6 2010, 19:24:05 UTC
So glad Gideon's appearance fit for you. :) Hope the future of the story does the same.

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jerico_cacaw November 5 2010, 04:48:16 UTC
Everything I was planning to say sputtered and died when realization hit me: Holy Shit, it's only been a day?

For a while you got me convinced that Gideon was the Unsub. Hell, I still am not sure he's not. But anyway. You have me in the edge of my seat. This story just keeps getting better and better, even i I want to hit Hotch (and Rossi, but Hotch mostly) because people who gets separated are the first victims in movies, always.

*goes back to read all chapters*

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sodakey November 6 2010, 19:27:00 UTC
Oh, dude, I know. I am the master at taking 11 months to tell about 24 hours...

*facepalm

Thanks for... uh... reading anyway? lol

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