Criminal Minds: Trompe L'oeil (part 17)

[sodakey]

tbc

Comments

[daylyn]

So wonderfully suspenseful. I'm biting my nails over Hotch amd loved the interaction between Rossi and Gideon. I love that Reid was right... and now everyone knows it too. There's still this sense that something... BIG... is going to happen at any second. Anxiously waiting for more.

[sodakey]

Thank you so much. Glad the tension is coming through. Balancing that against the required exposition is always a bit of a balancing act at this point.

(Pleased Gideon and Rossi interaction seemed to fit)

Thanks again.

[super_pan]

What the heck! I was like, hooray, new chapter! But when I started to read it, I had no idea what was going on, and I went back and realized that somehow I had missed, like five chapters or so! I just read them all sort of backwards and inside out, but anyway, I love how this is starting to fall together! And finally we find Gideon! I have theories! Theories I tells ya! Whoooooo! (this whoooooo! must have the proper redneck intonation to accurately convey my excitement)!
Can't wait for more, and thanks so much for keeping posting!

[sodakey]

Well, I checked out for a while. I mostly assumed a lot of the readers had as well. Hope that though you read backwards and inside out you were still able to make sense of it, lol.

Can't wait to hear your theories.

(Sitting back to drag up proper redneck Whooooo intonation)

;)

And, I'm on a freakin' roll this weekend. Getting 19 up today. Then, headed to California for work. Hope to post the last of it when I get back.

[peach_megumi]

This story just keeps getting better! It is simply crackling with tension, and I cannot wait to see some of it resolved.

And, I'm very glad that Reid knows he is not crazy now. I am on the edge of my seat to see where they go from here.

[sodakey]

Thank you. :) So much.

[girlkamikazi]

I LOVE YOU! AND THIS STORY!! This fic is just so so so so awesome, and it gets better with every chapter. I love the subtle (or not so) ratcheting up of tension, of awareness of the team. The interaction between Rossi and Gideon is great -- just what I imagine they would be like if we saw them together in the show. I'm worried that the unsub is Gideon, or at least that he's working with Gideon. And that Reid is going to lose his shit.
Thanks for sharing! Off to read the next two.

[sodakey]

Thank you so much. I'm glad the Rossi and Gideon interaction worked. I worried for a minute that readers would rather Hotch or Reid have the first exchange, but this is the scene that was in my head, so...

:)