mek ese tot nem-premehebe ... The crumbling stones, the rubble in the streets. The scent in the air is unmistakable -- as I thought, I have seen this place before!

[there's some rustling as the device is picked up and shaken; then a few short thuds, like fingers tapping on the surface]

And this again, as well... [she's speaking directly to the ( Read more... )

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