Please help! I'll make you brownies!! For those of you who know me, it's not a lie :D

[sonar713]

I HAVE THIS PROFILE PAPER DUE TOMORROW. I LITERALLY WROTE IT IN NO TIME, AND I'M JUST WONDERING IF ANYONE COULD EDIT THIS FOR ME! I JUST NEED FOR IT TO MAKE SENSE, FLOW, AND BE GRAMATICALLY CORRECT. THANKS!

Comments

[liface]

- She is undecided about her major, though she is considering becoming an English teacher.
- First paragraph is a little wordy, you use would too much.
- Gwyneth had found a boy that had her going crazy for him. -> Gwyneth found a boy and went crazy for him.
- Most people would ask “what’s wrong with this guy?”
- her Economics book? also take out comma in this sentence
- comma use in the next sentence, too many!
- last sentence of an essay reads like a run-on

[sonar713]

Oh man, thank you sooooo much! I love you so much right now! You will be receiving brownies as soon as I get your address. I don't remember where you posted it, haha. Oh, and did it makes sense? Could you find my "dominant meaning?"