Just went and read all the other chapters. You've got a great story here. I have been reading other Edward turns human stories and this is probably my favorite one. Keep it up. :)
It makes me really happy to hear that this is one of your favorite human Edward stories. I really like human Edward--a little more vulnerable, a lot less troubled.
Yes, I do enjoy Human!Edward a lot, especially when well-written. A well-written one keeps the main things that make Edward, Edward.
Although, Vampire!Edward is such a complex character that it makes him fun to read and write. When people can write his angst, guilt, and conflicts well, it makes it worth it.
I love it! :3 This was definitely a chapter worth waiting for.
Edward didn't notice right till the very end that something was different XP Maybe he's absorbed more of Bella than just her immunity! Lol. Speaking of, just a random thought, but why didn't Bella change if Edward bite her. Surely since he did bite her she would have started changing, even if he stopped a lot earlier than her was meant to...
Don't apologize! You're not picking! You're getting me thinking!
Edward not noticing until the end...I was picturing him as just being really disoriented. He desperately misses Bella, and there she is in front of him, and that's all he can really think about. Her.
Bella doesn't change because she is immune to vampire venom. Bella already has some resistance to vampire powers that involve her mind. When James bites her, it's like getting a vaccine against vampirism; the venom doesn't stay in her body (because Edward sucks it out) but her immune system develops the antibodies, if you will, against vampire venom. So when Edward bites her, she's already immune and doesn't change.
That part is understandable since he's just reverted back to being a vampire. That's got to be tough, going through that pain all over again...
Now, that makes more sense to me. Thanks for clearing it up :D I just hope the Volturi don't turn up now...though that would be interesting. Bella taking down the Volturi just by having them bite her XP That would be such an awesome ending.
You're very welcome :D And I'm glad you're not mad at me! I can't wait to read more :)
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And update soooooon! :D
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It makes me really happy to hear that this is one of your favorite human Edward stories. I really like human Edward--a little more vulnerable, a lot less troubled.
Thanks for reading!
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Although, Vampire!Edward is such a complex character that it makes him fun to read and write. When people can write his angst, guilt, and conflicts well, it makes it worth it.
And I've added you.
Good luck writing the next chapter. :)
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I'm loving this fanfic
it's one of the bests I read ,I can't wait to read more
update soon please xD
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Edward didn't notice right till the very end that something was different XP Maybe he's absorbed more of Bella than just her immunity! Lol. Speaking of, just a random thought, but why didn't Bella change if Edward bite her. Surely since he did bite her she would have started changing, even if he stopped a lot earlier than her was meant to...
Agh, I'm picking at your story again! Sorry! XP
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Edward not noticing until the end...I was picturing him as just being really disoriented. He desperately misses Bella, and there she is in front of him, and that's all he can really think about. Her.
Bella doesn't change because she is immune to vampire venom. Bella already has some resistance to vampire powers that involve her mind. When James bites her, it's like getting a vaccine against vampirism; the venom doesn't stay in her body (because Edward sucks it out) but her immune system develops the antibodies, if you will, against vampire venom. So when Edward bites her, she's already immune and doesn't change.
LOVE your comments. Thanks so much for reading.
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Now, that makes more sense to me. Thanks for clearing it up :D I just hope the Volturi don't turn up now...though that would be interesting. Bella taking down the Volturi just by having them bite her XP That would be such an awesome ending.
You're very welcome :D And I'm glad you're not mad at me! I can't wait to read more :)
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:)
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