i am a huge fan of these type of stories as well, and i'm really interested to see how it goes with annie being the one to take care of jeff this time. i can imagine she'll be rather thorough... ahem. :') can't wait for more!
Add me to the list of people who love these types of stories too. There's something about people taking care of each other scenarios that serve as great setups for emotional confessions and maybe even sexytimes haha. You create great images with your writing. The very last paragraph I had to read several times because it was quite powerful. I do feel bad for Duncan here though - the bloke's got some growing up to do.
I loove hurt/comfort, in fact I recently left a prompt on Ficcy Friday for an Annie taking care of Jeff type of story, and I'm so glad you are doing one, can't wait for more of this, great set up, I wonder why Annie hasn't come yet, I have a suspicion he pushed her out of the car's way and she's feeling too guilty to look at him, but we'll see, I'm already hooked on this story :D
I can already tell I'm really gonna love this story! I love "taking care of" fic. And OMG did Jeff push Annie out of the way of Duncan's car to protect her? Or is it like a mind-wandering hallucination thing?
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can't wait for more!
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Great job so far. I'm intrigued! :)
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I love your take on this! Great set-up. I'm looking forward to Annie's visit. More soon please!
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