hi.

[soyeahlike]

I would appreciate feedback on this. Please, oh please, read it and then just comment, even if it's to say you liked/hated it. Of course, in depth reviews are desired too.

Comments

[slanted_truth]

Wow, it's beautiful... Very sad and depressing, and beautiful. I don't know what else to say.

[soyeahlike]

thank you so much!

[talacky]

It's beautiful, as all your writing is. Although, sometimes I wish you writing would have more of a plot. That's probably not what you're going for, that's just my preference.

[soyeahlike]

the stuff that needs a plot, has a plot!
my life, however, has no plot that I can figure. So anything based around that, has no plot. Sorry.

[red_hair]

okay, this is me before reading your story ... *absentmindedly glum, kind of bored*
and this is me NOW.
*multiple orgasms*
<3<3<3

[soyeahlike]

THANK YOU!

*pleased*

[sybilhawthorne]

we like it. we understand the part about weight of blanket sometimes not being enough.

[soyeahlike]

oh, thank you! I thought that might just be me.

[gwen_louise]

I loved that. I can really identify with not realising you're crying until you see the tears. Really beautiful writing.

[soyeahlike]

thank you so much!
(also, I remembered I didn't address any canon issues in your fic. I didn't see any, and especially as you're writing primarily about Narcissa, there's a lot of leeway since she's fairly vague in the books. I thought you did a good job with that, and in the end where you said, bugger, I can't remember what you said and I'm too tired now to go back, but about the side of good or whatnot employing tactics they wouldn't have before--thought that was a nice detail. Thanks!)