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[spamtek]

I am drizzled by star-light; I lie here on some cool clear surface and feel scoured clean by a caring vastness above. A breeze stokes past as borne by comet-wisp, soft sussurus within my shallow soul and bears it deeper, deeper to and through itself to quietude unknown before, a stillness to all my seeming so greatly foreign that I gasp: I stretch

Comments

[rock_lee_writer]

I feel I must comment as some kind of positive reinforcement for you actually posting something, as it would be cool if the extent of known livejournal activity weren't just me whining endlessly about my life.

As to the meat of it, I like it, though it's not your best work (perhaps unsurprisingly). Or perhaps it's more out of my league than usual. If I can't tell the difference, at what point is it the one and not the other?

Hello.

[oneiral]

Are you still real?

Re: Hello.

[spamtek]

Well, like, I guess so.

Re: Hello.

[oneiral]

Fucking hell.