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Sep 28, 2004 10:39

I stabbed into them quickly, quick enough to feel the spray of warm blood on my cheek, but in my mind it all happened so slow. I watched their shirt curl in towards the tip of the blade, then give way and practically bury itself and this tip broke through the barrier which held it back. Its their eyes I remember most, never had i seen someone's ( Read more... )

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kittyfarts September 28 2004, 08:01:59 UTC
O_o

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spargo September 28 2004, 10:57:32 UTC
sorry the moment hit me

-Spargo

ps what do you think?

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kittyfarts September 28 2004, 10:59:53 UTC
i dunno. ;/

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captain_insane September 28 2004, 12:29:42 UTC
I'm scared... yet... intrigued.

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spargo September 28 2004, 17:25:42 UTC
:D I'm glad it had an effect :)

-Spargo

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padmei September 28 2004, 12:42:12 UTC
Not bad for a story.

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spargo September 28 2004, 17:24:43 UTC
thanks man, i might make something of it.. no thats a lie, im a short story guy, i like something i can write without drafting and making fucking blueprints and stuff ha ha.

-Spargo

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notseen September 28 2004, 13:38:45 UTC
I think it, very well written.. *claps*

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spargo September 28 2004, 13:57:38 UTC
thank you :)

-Spargo

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anekona2 September 28 2004, 18:19:17 UTC
very descriptive and detailed. youre a good writer!

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spargo September 29 2004, 06:47:51 UTC
thank you very much m'lady *tips hat*

-Spargo

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