Fic: Peanut Butter Pumpkin Wedding Cake, Part 3/3

Dec 03, 2009 20:19

Title: Peanut Butter-Pumpkin Wedding Cake
Author: sparseparsley
Rating: NC-17
Genre/Pairing: Total AU, Romantic Comedy, Dean/Cas
Summary: The good ones are sometimes assholes and always taken.

See Part 1 for extended headers and notes.

Part 3. )

fic-a-frack, dean/cas, spn is mouse herpes

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fledmusic December 4 2009, 05:46:52 UTC
OMG. I am so freaking thrilled you finished this. I just love everything about it so muuuuuuch. Your Castiel voice is so perfect; he's different, but still totally weird in that very Castiel-like way.

I spent the entire time like "Dean! Come on!!!! You're asking the wrong questions!" and when Cas thought he was a closet case because he kept going on about religion and it being "wrong" I was like *facepalm* OH DEAN. So it was sooooo great when he finally realized what a doof he'd been, and oh man, the ending was perfectly hilarious.

Also, did I mention HOOOOOOOOOT. I love so much when there's a great buildup in the relationship and lots of tension, because when it finally happens it is SO satisfying. Such a great payoff, in the emotional sense too.

Anyway, yeah, rambling, but I just really enjoyed this so much. :D

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sparseparsley December 4 2009, 18:05:05 UTC
Hee, thank you! I love a good ramble, it means I'm doing something right.

I was pretty worried that there was too much build up. I think it comes from this being my first long fic, I kept thinking 'You should be done now!' when the story wasn't finished yet.

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fledmusic December 4 2009, 22:43:55 UTC
No no, it was PERFECT. The build up is what makes it all worth it; I love when it takes awhile, because the end result is just that much more satisfying when you finally get there, and it makes their emotions emotions more authentic, I think.

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sparseparsley December 4 2009, 18:06:11 UTC
God that's a fantastic icon.

Thanks! It's great fun to bunk people.

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phate_phoenix December 4 2009, 06:06:48 UTC
*Gurgles*

Usually, I dislike AU's, but I liked the sound of your summary and wanted to check it out. I am so glad I did. :D There were so many squirm-worthy moments of embarrassment, ("NO DEAN. SHUT UP ABOUT THE DAMN BIB--OH NOW YOU'VE DONE IT, DUMBASS." D:) parts that made me laugh out loud, and others that made me giggle with fluffy-glee. :) Really loved this, can't say it enough. Loved this.

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sparseparsley December 4 2009, 18:37:13 UTC
Thanks!

And thanks for checking it out despite misgivings. Dean/Cas doesn't lend itself very naturally to these kinds of total AUs unlike, say, McShep which is pretty much built for those 'Rodney is a ____ and John is a _____' type stories.

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spacefragments December 4 2009, 06:21:48 UTC
so much love for this. just, yes. ♥♥♥♥♥

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sparseparsley December 4 2009, 18:39:59 UTC
Thanks, bb! Glad you liked it!

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sparseparsley December 4 2009, 18:41:40 UTC
Woo, Castiel approves of my porn!

:p Thanks. Gotta admit, I had more fun with the shmoopy stuff that I thought I would.

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