Fic: Peanut Butter Pumpkin Wedding Cake, Part 3/3

[sparseparsley]

Title: Peanut Butter-Pumpkin Wedding Cake
Author: sparseparsley
Rating: NC-17
Genre/Pairing: Total AU, Romantic Comedy, Dean/Cas
Summary: The good ones are sometimes assholes and always taken.

See Part 1 for extended headers and notes.

Comments

[musicdiamond]

OMG I love it! I've been waiting for you to finish this ever since you posted the teaser and, well, it is awesome. Sexy, funny, hot--you totally sold all the tension between the two of them and it was really a delight to read. And of course, the sexxing at the end was incredibly hot--I love Dean as a pushy bottom!

A couple of my favorite lines:
“No, it's not at all my thing. I changed a tire once.” His eyes meet Dean's again, and for a second they sparkle with humor. “It was invigorating.”

There's a ripped piece of paper waving in his face, attached to Sam's hand, which is attached to Sam's arm, which is attached to Sam's bitch-face.

Really delightful overall. And nice and lengthy too :)

[sparseparsley]

I love Dean as a pushy bottom!

Ha! I really, really do too. Of course, I love him as pretty much anything, so take that as you will.

Thank you for reading! 'Selling' it is a really good description since I spent a lot of time thinking 'Are people gonna buy this scene? Would I buy this?'. Glad you did! :p

[clockstopper]

I wanna like marry this fic and have this fic's babies!

Oh it was utter perfection. The way the little things just kept making Dean keep thinking Cas was getting married to Anna and then poor Cas thinking Dean was a paranoid, closeted freak. I loved Sam here and his pulling for Dean even though he thinks Dean possibly committing adultery is wrong and how their problems are still sort of like their problems on the show. And of course his awkwardness with Jess was absolutely awesome. I loved Dean's internal struggle as he found out more about Cas and Cas being able to cook and the way to Dean's heart is totally through his stomach and Cas just doing all sort of things that made him PERFECT for Dean, but Dean didn't wanna be that guy. The flow of this was just perfect and the story was lovely in pace. And, of course, the sex... guh! The whole thing was just wonderful.

(sidenote: I'm not sure what movie you're referencing here. The one with Ben Stiller? I'm intrigued.)

[sparseparsley]

Aww, you still leave the best feedback! That bit about Dean's internal struggle was pretty much my entire idea behind and basis of the fic. I just kept picturing him going "Oh come on!" and tossing his hands in the air every time Cas did or said the next awesome thing.

It's not any particular movie, Ben Stiller was just the first name I thought of when I thought of movies where the Romantic Lead has to be facepalm-dense and/or unbelievably unlucky to make the plot work. Like in 'Meet the Parents'.

[sarahjay55]

I'm trying to form words and leave some kind of coherent feedback, but it doesn't look like that's gonna happen any time soon, so can I just agree with everything clockstopper said, even if it was nearly 3 years ago? ;-)

I'll just add... I'm tingling! Fucking tingling from reading that. And I don't mean... there. All over. That was awesome.
And the build up, the tension, was absolutely PERFECT.

So I guess now all that remains is to find more of your work. I'm pretty sure there were chores I had to do 2 hours ago when I sat down here, but pffft.....

[swing_set13]

PEANUT BUTTER PUMPKIN FOR THE WIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED THE ANGEL CAMEOS!!!!!! I LOVED SAM'S INNER FANBOY!!!!!!!!! This story was amazing! I was giggling like mad! OMG!

(I secretly want a one-shot of Thanksgiving with Dean drooling over Castiel's baking skillz....)

[sparseparsley]

Holy crap that's a lot of exclamation points! *lol* Thank you very much!

Sam is such a fanboy, he's built for it! I mean, look at him:

[swing_set13]

OMG!!!!!! I totally forgot about that scene. EPIC! I like how Dean is assessing the danger/competition that is Uriel in the background. Sam could probably give Becky a run for her money...

This story ROCKED MY SOCKS!

I sadly want to know what peanut butter pumpkin cake tastes like now...I once made pumpkin chocolate brownies...it wasn't that swell.

And JESSICA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EMT!Dean! I will flail at my computer for a bit before dragging my ass back to studying. Lovely story!

[cherryshadowz]

The title seemed so familiar and when I clicked on it I recognized the story and was thought, "Yay! There's more". Then I realized it was three really long parts and thought, "Holy Crap! There's more!". All this to say I loved it, I love rom coms and this had just the right balance of antsy angst, hilarity and romance. <3 very, very much! Perfect ending!

[sparseparsley]

It's freakin' huge! I was expecting it to be 20k words at the absolute very most and then it just kept going.

Ah haha, I like 'antsy angst'. Because it's not really angsty in that dark, emo way. It's a more 'squirm in your seat and call them idiots' kind of thing.

Thanks for reading!

[sparseparsley]

Thank you!

I admit I was a little worried about how grabby and growly I made Cas in the porny bit. I thought about going back and mellowing him out a little but... I don't know, he deserves to have some fun!

Very glad you enjoyed it.