[Arashi] simplicity: a Love Story in eight

[honeypuffed]

simplicity: a Love Story in eight
Nino/Ohno | R, 3229 words
A giant giant giant thank you to harinezumi_kun for her fic The Book of Love which completely inspired this, from start to finish. I have never written something this long and actually finished it, like, ever, in this fandom. Early happy birthday to waxrose !

Comments

[harinezumi_kun]

FIRST (I hope)

Back later to read :3

[harinezumi_kun]

Okay, back.

Oh. My. God. How did my drabbly little nothing inspire this...this...I literally can't think of words to describe it. Wonderful. Beautiful. Thrilling. Tender. Just...perfect. (;_;)

My favorite part was the first kiss ♥ It really was electric, the way you wrote it :)

Ugh, I'm just going to go read it again, now. Over and over.

♥♥♥♥♥

[honeypuffed]

that paragraph i mentioned? just really, there was so much in it that i wanted desperately to fill out every little situation you mentioned, create something around it. literally as i read it i could see it all there and i almost stopped mid-reading to write it all down.

so still: thankyouthankyouthankyou ♥♥♥♥ i love you forever ♥

[0deandra0]

Loved it! Especially part 4! ;)
Thank you for writing this! ^^

[honeypuffed]

you're so welcome! thankyou♥

[rinalin]

This is so amazingly, startlingly good. I love the journey. I love that Nino's gaming is better with Ohno there. I love that it wasn't all easy and happy. Most of all, I LOVE this style. This almost backward sentence structure...I donno. It just kind of thrills me.

[honeypuffed]

i'm glad you say you love the style because it's really just a bunch of like, run-on sentences and grammar destruction in disguise, heehee. "amazingly, startlingly good" -- i don't even- just, thank you so much ;n; ♥

[vulpus_mirus]

Aaaawww. Ninoooooooooooooo. Ah. Your characterization was fantastic. ♥

Omnomnom public hallway snogging.

[honeypuffed]

! that makes me happy to hear. i wasn't sure if by the end i'd just gone completely off track, so thaaaank you ♥

[jade_lil]

oh my heart.. it was a journey of love eh? I love how you narrate every single one, from the first until the last. Nino's always been quite the unsure one, but then with Ohno everything seemed to fit like it's always been like that from the start. I adore the one at the cinema, makes me want to whack them both and kiss them afterwards hehehe.. the 2nd to the last made me nervous, but it's soooo Ohno to say something like "If you're going to make out with pretty girls, make sure you invite me next time," even after it was clear that Nino did something bad..

can really feel the love in every single line. thank you for sharing this. very very good job..

[honeypuffed]

your comment = ♥! thank you so so much, i'm glad you felt it :) :)