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Round 1

Jul 08, 2012 07:41

Please read the rules before prompting.

This round will close at 5000 comments.

Prompt Formatting:
Alphabetize your prompts because they will be archived that way.
Put [RPF] before all RPF prompts
Put [Crossover] before all crossover prompts
Please put the pairing and the gist of the prompt. For example, Curt/Peter, mentor-student relationship

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Flash/Peter - Grief-stricken sex at school anonymous July 8 2012, 06:01:28 UTC

Flash is one of the few to approach Peter and try to empathize with him after Uncle Ben's death. The locker incident might be the first time he reaches out, but it's not the last time. Peter, still reeling from the loss and his guilt, doesn't react so well the other times either.

But one time, instead of shrugging him off, Peter does blow up and let off his anger and upset. And because I am a walking cliche, I would love to see some desperate making out and groping lead to sex, maybe in the locker room or a closet in the science lab, whatever, just somewhere unexpected and furtive, with neither of them knowing what the hell they're doing. Peter just knows it's forcing his hurt back to a safe place and Flash, well... what he does to Parker is his own business, always has been, always will be.

Re: Flash/Peter - Grief-stricken sex at school anonymous July 8 2012, 07:13:22 UTC

I second this so so much. Asdfghjkl

I'm really glad I'm not the only one who wants this, actually.

Re: Flash/Peter - Grief-stricken sex at school anonymous July 8 2012, 10:59:34 UTC

YES.

Re: Flash/Peter - Grief-stricken sex at school anonymous July 8 2012, 12:25:05 UTC

Oh god what is this feeling, I really want to write this.

Re: Flash/Peter - Grief-stricken sex at school anonymous July 9 2012, 11:46:12 UTC

THIS! <3

FILL: Flash/Peter - Grief-stricken sex at school (1/4) anonymous July 9 2012, 12:06:42 UTC

So I may have accidentally shmooped this up a bit more than intended. OH WELL. HERE YOU GO. In five times format. Hope it's even remotely like what you wanted, OP.

Five times Flash tried to reach out to Peter, and the one time Peter reached back

one

The first time Flash tries to sympathise with Peter, things don't go so well. To be perfectly honest, he's not sure what he'd been expecting. When he hears about Peter's uncle, his heart sinks and he feels completely dreadful for all the stupidly childish trouble he's ever given Peter, since he met him. It's not that he hates Peter, it's not that at all, he just struggles a bit with human interraction. He doesn't mean to blame his childhood, but it's part of it.

So he tries to talk to Peter. He's not sure if he's ever just talked to Peter before, and it makes him kind of nervous. He approaches Peter at his locker, begins to speak, and he's not even really sure what happens next except that seconds later he finds himself, rather impressively, shoved up against the locker, and Peter ( ... )

FILL: Flash/Peter - Grief-stricken sex at school (2/4) anonymous July 9 2012, 12:07:23 UTC

three

Flash watches on silently as Peter sits on the bench outside, flicking through some photos he's taken. He looks dissatisfied for a moment and shoves them hastily back in his bag. He looks up at Flash. "I'm really not in the mood," he says quietly.

"You're never in the mood," Flash replies, but that just sounds really weird, so he frowns and corrects himself. "I mean, I know. I get it."

Peter looks at him, really looks at him this time, and then looks away again. There's a bandaid on his forehead that barely covers the cut beneath it, and it makes Flash worry about all the times he's injured Peter.

"I can talk," Flash says. "Like, if- if you need to- or if you-" He stops there.

Peter scrunches up his face, looking like he's about to cry, and Flash maybe freaks out a little. God, what is he supposed to do now? But then Peter gets up and leaves of his own accord, and Flash is simultaneously relieved and exasperated.

fourFlash has a magical plan: get to science class super early, get a bench, then scare away all potential lab ( ... )

FILL: Flash/Peter - Grief-stricken sex at school (3/4) anonymous July 9 2012, 12:07:53 UTC

fiveIt better be the right door. Gwen had said 36. Had she said 36? Maybe it was 39? God, he's probably getting all worked up for nothing. Peter probably doesn't live on this street, or even in this suburb. He's probably not home. Flash knocks on the door, considers running, and then when the door opens, a lovely lady is standing there saying, "Hi darling, are you here to see Peter?" and Flash finds his feet frozen to the spot and his tongue not of much use either. This must be his aunt, then ( ... )

FILL: Flash/Peter - Grief-stricken sex at school (4/4) anonymous July 9 2012, 12:08:48 UTC

+oneFlash becomes very quickly aware that Peter and him are the only two in detention after school today. Flash is still indignant about being here, but he's glad that at least he gets an hour where Peter can't run away. He still hasn't figured out why it's so important to him that Peter listens -- he's stopped trying to understand it. The teacher comes in, assigns them the totally enthralling task of cleaning up the science labs, and then he leaves them to do it, unsupervised ( ... )

Re: FILL: Flash/Peter - Grief-stricken sex at school (4/4) j_gabrielle July 9 2012, 14:07:31 UTC

As Charie: I. LOVE. YOU. I've been stalking this prompt and this was absolutely delectable. And I adore Flash in this. Great job!

As mod: Yay! First fill! :DD

OP here!! anonymous July 10 2012, 02:05:03 UTC

Oh my god, that was exactly what I wanted. T__T Thank you so, so much!

I love the format and especially your Flash, who reveals the same shades of complexity the film could only hint at. He tries so hard to get through even though he's clumsy at it. ♥ And your Peter is just as perfect: fierce and protective of his grief, to the point of lashing out. The moment he accidentally hits him in the face with the door, and the resulting mixed feelings, is wonderfully telling.

... And ffff, yes, the handjobs. HOT.

Thank you so much. I'm qualifying this as an early birthday present. XD ♥

Re: FILL: Flash/Peter - Grief-stricken sex at school (4/4) anonymous July 10 2012, 06:46:25 UTC

This is SUPERB.

Oh man, they're so adorably hot and awkward together but like in a way that makes sense too, I dont know, I love this pairing. You wrote them so so well, just like I imagined their first time science lab tryst would be like.

Re: FILL: Flash/Peter - Grief-stricken sex at school (4/4) chaotic4life July 10 2012, 15:56:55 UTC

This is fantastic ... your grip on the characters is spot on!

Re: FILL: Flash/Peter - Grief-stricken sex at school (4/4) anonymous July 11 2012, 18:04:13 UTC

♥ Love and kisses. Thank you for writing this.

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<3 anonymous August 5 2012, 16:29:07 UTC

WHAT IS THIS BRILLIANCE I DON'T EVEN...

-Cough- Right. <3
I love Flash's POV, here. I especially loved the thing with the chocolate milk, that was a great touch.

Thank you for writing this! (-:

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