Drabbles

[spikesfool]

These are my two latest drabbles from open_on_sunday. I thought I'd post them here so I could save them in my memories. The prompt was flag. The first one, Intentions, got a mention at su_herald.

Comments

[brunettepet]

I enjoyed both of these vivid sexual snapshots. I could picture this perfectly: In the bedroom’s fire-shadowed corner, Angelus waited, lips curved in a thin smile. William the soon-to-be- Bloody doesn't know what's in store for him, but he finds out in "A Rough Wooing." Those last two lines are wonderful.

[spikesfool]

Squeeee!!!! Thank you, hon. I find these very hard to do, so I'm thrilled you like them and the way they were meant to dovetail.

[vampyrehunterm]

Those were great. Poor William, he had no idea.

[spikesfool]

Evil Angelus. Drusilla as bait and then he pounced! William never had a chance.

Thank you! I'm glad you liked them. I don't do that many true drabbles. They're hard!

[greenstone_j]

Mmm... both rather lovely *grin* Devious old Angelus *happy sigh* And naive William soon not to be... *evil grin*

[spikesfool]

Ah, yes. William. So sweet, so beautiful to debauch. And he revels in it, gloriously. I'm sure Angelus was very happy to teach him all the....ins and outs. :D

*see you evil grin and raise it by a 'very'*

[acacia5]

I love your drabbles. I think your writing style is very well suited to them. You use words, not just to tell a story, but to paint an intricate, beautiful picture.

[spikesfool]

Oh that's exactly what I'm trying to do, paint a little picture that gets across one moment of time. *bounce bounce* Thank you, sweetie.

Did you make you avi? It's gorgeous. I'd love to see one of Spike like that.

[acacia5]

vamptastica made this avi. Isn't it wonderful. I love getting a chance to use it when Angelus is featured in a fic.

[spikesfool]

I should have known. She does beautiful stuff.

[spikesfool]

Hooray!!!! Thank you, honey. Now I feel all poety.

I'm actually kind of proud of the drabbles I've written for open_sunday. They're hard work and fun all at the same time. I'm looking forward to the next prompt.

*squeezes you tight*