You're so talented! *sighs* Very touching that she tells him a "story" about herself. It seems even more intense, more personal that way. Yay for the kiss. Here's a special request for the next chapter, which you can feel free to ignore. Can Bill be aware that she cried in sickbay, and feel bad that he left her there alone? You know, maybe an "I'm sorry and here's how I'm making it up to you" gesture? I probably shouldn't make requests, but I just enjoy reading this so much! You've SO got me hooked.
I wouldn't say that! lol far from it in fact. I just have time and a big imagination. See, I'd take that into consideration, but I work on a 3 chapter sort of leverage. I've already written up to Chapter 8. I will post chapter 6 when Chapter 9 is complete. But...there's nothing to say that something like that can't be played into it somewhere down the line ;)
Thanks for your time and comment :) It is much appreciated.
This one was the longest and probably took me the most amount of time to write. I had to throw in some sort of A/R in there somewhere and I was hoping it would go down well, given the large amount of angst before the final scene :) It's good to see that it has!
The next instalment should arrive later in the week :) Thanks for following this :D
Ok, read the last two chapters last night, very late to bed I might add :)
But WOW, hell of a roller coaster ride you got us all going on!! Great work, this just gets better and better. Your plot is great and chapters are packed with suspense and action. Loving it can't wait for more.
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See, I'd take that into consideration, but I work on a 3 chapter sort of leverage. I've already written up to Chapter 8. I will post chapter 6 when Chapter 9 is complete. But...there's nothing to say that something like that can't be played into it somewhere down the line ;)
Thanks for your time and comment :) It is much appreciated.
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Another great chapter ::hugs:: I can't wait for the next installment!
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This one was the longest and probably took me the most amount of time to write. I had to throw in some sort of A/R in there somewhere and I was hoping it would go down well, given the large amount of angst before the final scene :) It's good to see that it has!
The next instalment should arrive later in the week :) Thanks for following this :D
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But WOW, hell of a roller coaster ride you got us all going on!! Great work, this just gets better and better. Your plot is great and chapters are packed with suspense and action. Loving it can't wait for more.
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I'm naughty. I put the characters through hell, don't I? hehe. Thanks hun!
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my head is a bit explodey at the moment so I don't know how coherent this is but anyway.
I loves.
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