J2 - hooker!Jared/hitman!Jensen
anonymous
August 14 2011, 17:13:00 UTC
Jared is an escort who have seen something he wasn't supposed to see and now there is a hitman sent after him.
Jensen is a well dressed cold professional, but this time he finds himself unable to finish his assignment - he can't kill a man who turns out to be his high school crush, JT.
(bonus points if they weren't close friends, because Jen was very reserved back then and Jay was Mr Popular, but Jay was always nice to him)
Filled -- The Hit 1/4sandymgAugust 18 2011, 04:22:59 UTC
Nonnie: This probably isn't what you were thinking of. And it's the tamest thing to ever hit a hardcore meme. But it's what bled out of me.
The HitJensen is exclusive. He works when he wants. Says no more often than he says yes. And never fails to satisfy. His clients like his dedication, coolness and most definitely his style. Some even say he’s not hard on the eyes. But it’s not about that
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Re: Filled -- The Hit 4/4fleeting_wingsAugust 18 2011, 05:07:36 UTC
Oh my goodness, this is so good! I'm absolutely intrigued by your Jared and Jensen already. Your writing! GAH! Their history, though written briefly, is purposely left vague, but I can still picture that sweet high school crush, something that could have been. Gosh, I really wanna know what made Jensen decide to kill for a living (his foster mom sounds like a bitch!) and why Jared lost his scholarship and is now whoring. Poor boys, so insecure and full of issues, but the ending is leaving things WIDE OPEN for a 'VERSE! hint hint ;D Please let there be more? ♥
Re: Filled -- The Hit 4/4sandymgAugust 18 2011, 05:11:27 UTC
Thanks so much. I appreciate your kinds words. I do like these boys but have so many committments for other incomplete verses I just can't take on another at present. I will offer this storyline up for anyone who feels like taking it on and maybe even writing some schmoopy porn to follow their great escape.
Re: Filled -- The Hit 4/4thisweshallseeAugust 18 2011, 05:48:24 UTC
I loved this! <333 I can't help but want more. :-) Now I want to know how they got here, it makes me want to know what happened after highschool to make them end up doing what they do, and where they go from here. Great job. :-)
Re: Filled -- The Hit 4/4your_byronAugust 18 2011, 07:23:31 UTC
Good morning! I wanted some porn with my coffee and here you had to go and write something like this. And now i want a Jared POV, a prequel, a sequel, sweet lovemaking and...a verse, i want a verse!
Awesome story! I love! So sweet. See, give your crush a apple and you will not be killed several years later. *g*
Re: Filled -- The Hit 4/4sandymgAugust 19 2011, 01:17:24 UTC
Thanks. I know. This is like anti-porn. Doesn't quite fit. But like I said it just came out. It's still dark for me so I can't see me continuing with these guys. But I'm open to sharing the plot bunny with anyone who feels like taking it up and doing it justice.
Re: Filled -- The Hit 4/4tmn1966August 18 2011, 11:45:31 UTC
I know I shouldn't be amazed at how much information you are able to put into a story with such brevity. Jensen's childhood was not a good one and I can see where money is going to be a motivator for him - not having enough to eat as a child, well, I can't even imagine how that would be. And maybe I'm perverse, but I'm glad you included the 'messy' details involved with someone dying. You're right, they don't tell you those things, but they are there nonetheless. Another way to show how cold and calculating Jensen has to be
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Re: Filled -- The Hit 4/4sandymgAugust 19 2011, 01:18:26 UTC
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. It is an intriguing set of characters but they are honestly just a little too dark for me. Maybe someone else will feel like taking them up one day.
Jensen is a well dressed cold professional, but this time he finds himself unable to finish his assignment - he can't kill a man who turns out to be his high school crush, JT.
(bonus points if they weren't close friends, because Jen was very reserved back then and Jay was Mr Popular, but Jay was always nice to him)
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Awesome story! I love! So sweet. See, give your crush a apple and you will not be killed several years later. *g*
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