I will survive

[spn_4eva]

Title: I will survive (from the song by Gloria Gaynor)
Characters: Sam, Dean
Word count: 3293 words
Summary: Winchesters deal with Dean's disability (MS)
Time Frame: Set immediately after Acquiesced
Disclaimer: Oh how I wish... Alas!
Rating: Gen

Comments

[si_star_x]

Hey girl! I'm just about to read this... *Hugs* Make sure you post it to the hoodie_time community so other people can read it. ♥

[si_star_x]

Okay. This was absolutely stunning. I'm really jealous of your writing right now, it's just so real and to the point and in-character. You're able to shoot images straight into my mind and I felt the pain and concern and frustrations so clearly. I loved the way you had the first section as a flashback to the past in Dean's PoV- the way he bought the brace for his foot and did manage to keep it from Sam for a while. That just tugged at my heartstrings, poor Dean.

I thought the haircut scene was brilliant, I mean, it was totally adorable that Sam wanted to cut Dean's hair ("“So? I still like my ears how they are, attached to my head”- Dean has the most adorable ears), but then when Sammy asked Dean to cut his it just melted me. I loved the uncertainty and then when Sam insisted that Dean trusts himself (because Sam is still an awesome little brother and still trusts Dean regardless) he let himself do it and it happened. That was a really clever and moving scene

[spn_4eva]

I was just about to message you to come read this! You're so fast girl! I can't tell you how happy your comment made me. I have tears in my eyes.

And now I'm squealing with happiness.

You have no idea what your opinion on this means to me. I was more scared to post this because I was afraid you might not like it as much compared to the previous one. I am so so SOOOO happy you liked it.
LOVE YOU ♥♥♥♥♥♥ and thank you for all your support ♥♥

[si_star_x]

Okay, now I have tears in my eyes and a smile on my face. You're lucky I was awake, I'm usually asleep until around ten but Paul had an interview today so I woke up early. \o/

That's really sweet that my opinion counts, always happy to spur you on and be your cheerleader.

I loved it even more, if anything! Now that we now how they work and how everybody is feeling... I adore the 'verse. It's lovely. You're awesome. The End. :D

♥♥<3<3

[wave_obscura]

Totally cute :D Thanks for sharing!

[spn_4eva]

Thank you for reading =D

[neonchica]

Wow - A new part or your verse so quickly makes me a very happy chica! You're capturing the disability so well, and I'm loving the angst and love and indecision between the brothers. It's a difficult place to be, trying to reconcile oneself from brother to caregiver, or protector to protectee, but you've done a great job showing the balancing act that both boys are going through as they adjust to their new normal. Keep up the writing - I'm loving it!

[spn_4eva]

I am sooooooooooooo glad you liked it! After all this was your idea to begin with. I'm just happy to be able to write something that you like and return the favor for a change!
Thank you =))

I will Survive

[sagaluthien]

Great to see that you continue write ms!Dean and that you think it will be a verse. I will definitley be a reader of it.

Re: I will Survive

[spn_4eva]

Thank you so much. I'll gladly make this into a 'verse if I get awesome readers like you =))

[turquoisetumult]

Awesome. Love the sequel and the moment where Sam asks Dean to cut his hair. So lovely.

The only thing I would suggest is improving the grammar in these stories. If you could find a beta (editor), that person could easily help you out with things like that.

Content-wise, though, this was great! Keep up the good work!

[spn_4eva]

Yeah, I read it a couple of times, but I guess I couldn't find the mistakes because I was the one writing but I will keep that in mind for next time =)

I'm glad you liked that moment. It's one of my favorite =))

[turquoisetumult]

Your spelling and sentence structure was totally fine. I was generally speaking about the dialogue. Commas are usually placed before the end of a statement inside the quotation marks. See here for example.

I just really love the way this is written and I feel it would be a shame for others to dismiss it because they might think it's not quality work. :)

[spn_4eva]

Ooooo I see what you mean. I don't even remember learning that in school. Oh well I'll learn now =)

Thanks for pointing out my mistakes. Hopefully the 'verse will get better in the future and you won't be disappointed =D