Comments | spn_50states: Drive (Sam, Dean, OC's) PG-13

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Drive (Sam, Dean, OC's) PG-13

Aug 03, 2007 18:47

Title: Drive
Author: rejeneration, but you can call me Jen
Pairing: Sam & Dean
Rating: PG-13 for language, violence
Word Count: 5080
Summary: Set after AHBL 1 & 2. Hell isn't the only side interested in the Brothers Winchester.
A/N: This was written for spn_50states, my state being Illinois. HOLLAH! It's not the story I set out to write, but it's the story that got ( Read more... )

Comments 44

aliaseverus August 5 2007, 04:48:19 UTC

That was awesome. 'nuff said.

rejeneration August 7 2007, 18:17:08 UTC

Why thank you! It was a lot of fun to write. -grin- Thanks for reading!

zenamydog August 5 2007, 12:00:08 UTC

Really enjoyed this and so well written. Thank you.

rejeneration August 7 2007, 18:17:22 UTC

Thank you, hon! I really appreciate that!

albeitslowly August 5 2007, 14:58:22 UTC

rejeneration August 7 2007, 18:22:22 UTC

Loved this darlin'. You snagged me when Dean rubbed the grease into his jeans and Sam knew he was gonna have to work really hard to get out the stain, cuz c'mon, we both know the wasn't thinking about jeans...

-grin- I loved that you caught this. When I was writing that, I was sitting in a cubbie in the Portland airport waiting for my plane to board and this image was just so ... vivid in my head. Sam watching Dean rub the grease in and there's the topical thought - I'll never get that out - but then there's the longer, the underlying, the deep-dark-neversay. That stain'll stay longer than my brother... Sort of gripped right at the heart.

I've said this before when the issue of faith comes up, but faith is about believing in what you don't see, not about knowing what's right in front of your face.

I hear ya!

In one way, the idea of Dean being Sam's angel is spot on perfect, because angels have no faith. The have seen God and don't need it. In another way, I think Dean has more faith than any of them, because no matter how many ( ... )

albeitslowly August 8 2007, 23:28:04 UTC

You're more than welcome. I'm not often moved to write in-depth comments about fic. Yes, I'm one of those yay, squee, flail reviewers, because something has to be really profound for me to say, "I know what you did here, and I really appreciate it." I love just plain fic, too, but I love even more the ones that you have to work a little bit for, because they're so much more rewarding in the end. This was one of those.

And as far as my stuff, well...*smishes you*

wingfetish August 5 2007, 16:42:34 UTC

This is great! I really enjoyed the overall tone of the story. And I love Dean's guardian angel. But even more, I love that Sam can't have one, but that he has one anyway, in Dean. Fantastic piece!

rejeneration August 7 2007, 18:30:33 UTC

This is great! I really enjoyed the overall tone of the story. And I love Dean's guardian angel. But even more, I love that Sam can't have one, but that he has one anyway, in Dean. Fantastic piece!

Thank you, thank you, and thank you, for reading and letting me know what you enjoyed :D

junalele August 5 2007, 23:30:08 UTC

Oh yes, please! I like this outcome. Muchly. And this John. And the fact that he is sooo fatherly and all. *melts*

Yep, managed to track other fics down. HA!

rejeneration August 7 2007, 18:25:32 UTC

Oh yes, please! I like this outcome. Muchly. And this John. And the fact that he is sooo fatherly and all. *melts*

-grin- There is so much irony in writing your father into fiction. I have never done it before, but it was... quite the thing.

I see! Thanks so much for looking into it! This is, quite obviously, unlike all the others. -grinning- But I appreciate you taking the time to read it!

junalele August 7 2007, 19:00:40 UTC

You wrote your father into it? Teehee! Yep, that's bound to feel a bit...erh...weird.

And I appreciate the time you took to write it even more. And yes, sooo unlike the others. :D