Drive (Sam, Dean, OC's) PG-13

Aug 03, 2007 18:47

Title: Drive
Author: rejeneration, but you can call me Jen
Pairing: Sam & Dean
Rating: PG-13 for language, violence
Word Count: 5080
Summary: Set after AHBL 1 & 2. Hell isn't the only side interested in the Brothers Winchester.
A/N: This was written for spn_50states, my state being Illinois. HOLLAH! It's not the story I set out to write, but it's the story that got ( Read more... )

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rejeneration August 7 2007, 18:26:24 UTC
Thank you, so much! :D

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cloex_brosluvr August 7 2007, 04:12:44 UTC
This was very beautifully written.

And OMG you used Ridott in a fic!!!! When I was a lot younger, I would go there every Sunday to see my grandparents and my great grandmother.

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rejeneration August 7 2007, 18:28:36 UTC
This was very beautifully written.

Eee! Thank you :)

And OMG you used Ridott in a fic!!!! When I was a lot younger, I would go there every Sunday to see my grandparents and my great grandmother.

Hah! Then you know exactly the place I was writing about then! Or at least, I'd assume you do, considering you most likely took Route 20 into Ridott and that bars been there as long as I've been alive. -grin-

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cloex_brosluvr August 7 2007, 18:43:13 UTC
Yup, if you mean Ridott Corners. I've never been in there myself but I hear the food is good at least. (Now, I might have to stop by sometime just to see who I might run into. ;) )

A little over 10 years ago my sister was in a very bad accident near there and people from that bar came out to help.

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leighm August 7 2007, 19:08:18 UTC
Fabulous.

I swear this gave me chills when I read this:

“Your mother used to tell him angels were looking out for him. Tell him she wasn’t wrong.”

Also, I loved the idea of Dean being Sam's guardian angel. It's so ironic really because throughout season 2 and even moreso when Houses of the Holy came out, I really speculated that Dean could really be more than what we have known about him. He would fit the bill where his brother is concerned.

Your writing is like crack:) *hooked*

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rejeneration October 3 2007, 00:02:24 UTC
-grinning, slinking around you- Dear Lord, girl. How did I _not_ respond to this? And to the rest of the people who commented to this fic! Man, I suck! And don't you dare take a minute of your gorgeous Vegas vacation to respond to this. I mean it, missy!

But I wanted to tahnk you. I think maybe LJ was doing one of those things where it didn't tell me people responded. That's the only way I can even rectify the brain fart. -smirk- I'm as hooked on yours as you are on mine, possibly more. -grin-

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stars91 August 7 2007, 19:35:30 UTC
Very, very well written fic! I loved the scene you set for the boys and the additional characters were both entertaining and believable! John was certainly someone you could see them running into down the road!

Thanks for sharing this with us! It was a great read!

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rejeneration October 3 2007, 00:04:06 UTC
Thank you so much, hon! I'm really seriously happy with your thoughts about the additional characters, since they're all based on people I know. -grin- I love the idea of the boys running into my father, because I know him well enough, that I know he'd be just as he was in the fic. Perfectly happy to buy them drinks, for the company, perfectly happy to see himself in them, perfectly happy to offer them a place...

Thank you so much for reading and I sincerely apologize that it took me this long to get back to this! I think LJ just didn't send me the notifications! -shakes fist at LJ-

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evergleam83 August 7 2007, 22:20:07 UTC
Oh, I loved this. I love the idea that it's more than just "Watch out for Sammy, Dean." That there's a reason Dean won't stay dead, can't stay dead. I mean, I'm not actually too into the whole thing with Sam's faith, but I love the way you've explored it here.

And oh, the beginning with the boys standing by the car and ribbing each other just made me ache. I really hope they spend some time (and i don't see how they won't) next season on just how lost Sammy would be without his big brother, because that scene here made me so sad for how much Sam cannot lose his brother. Which is a nice change of pace. :)

Thanks so much for sharing this!

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rejeneration October 3 2007, 00:06:22 UTC
That there's a reason Dean won't stay dead, can't stay dead. I mean, I'm not actually too into the whole thing with Sam's faith, but I love the way you've explored it here.

The funniest thing? I'm not too actually into it myself, either! -grin- Which pretty much explains why it was fun for me to write. While I may have been at one point in my life, I've definitely changed... and it was like visiting old stomping grounds. -grin-

And oh, the beginning with the boys standing by the car and ribbing each other just made me ache. I really hope they spend some time (and i don't see how they won't) next season on just how lost Sammy would be without his big brother

ME TOO! I just can't see him not being devastated with the entire idea of losing Dean.

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to tell me what you thought! I'm sorry it took me so long to respond. I don't think LJ notified me that you'd commented, so I had no idea until I went back tonight!

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