Comments | spotsycool: Part Four

spotsycool

Part Four

May 15, 2012 12:16

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Comments 18

grey853 May 15 2012, 18:19:31 UTC

Sneaky!! I'm glad it has a good ending though. I was worried there for a bit even with your note about it not being a death story.

Thanks.

spotsycool May 15 2012, 18:29:26 UTC

I'm glad you thought it was a good ending. :)
Thanks for reading!

svetlanacat4 May 15 2012, 18:20:36 UTC

This is a wonderful story, Illya taking the lead... and now the story begins:
Brava!

spotsycool May 15 2012, 18:33:27 UTC

Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it. :)
Thanks so much for reading!

spikesgirl58 May 15 2012, 19:18:42 UTC

As I've said before - this is a great first story! And I think you will see that I wasn't just blowing smoke!

Rock on, you!

spotsycool May 15 2012, 21:41:47 UTC

Thanks, Charlie! :) Your words mean the world to me.

mrua7 May 15 2012, 19:35:13 UTC

I repeat. Well done!

spotsycool May 15 2012, 21:42:28 UTC

Thanks! *hugs* You're so kind.

avery11 May 16 2012, 00:27:52 UTC

If you hadn't told us it was your first story, I wouldn't have known. You show a deft hand with plot intricacies, and you kept me guessing until the end. Well done!

So now, what's next on your plate, hmm??

spotsycool May 16 2012, 00:58:08 UTC

What a lovely compliment. Thank you! :) I'm so pleased that you enjoyed the story, and thank you so much for commenting!

Hmm, the next thing on my plate...you'll just have to wait and see! ;)