Lineage - Chapter Nine

[sprbitch1313]

He’d known her all his life, known her, he was certain, better than anyone else ever could have.  He could sense both the subtle and dramatic shifts in her moods, feel it in his bones like an arthritic telling the weather.  He could piece together all the hidden meanings in the words she spoke, fill in the blanks among the things gone unsaid,

Comments

[spinningfrog]

I like it.

[sprbitch1313]

That's all you have to say to me? I like it...that's it?

[spinningfrog]

So if I had added a 'really' in there you would have been satisfied? Screw you buddy.
I was going to tell you that I enjoyed not only the fact that you advanced the story, but that you did so while presenting both accurate character portraits and a creepy yet annoying dead person voice that was echoing something I was thinking about before I read the story. But then I was distracted by a flashing light.

[sprbitch1313]

Bobby!

[erinrua]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!

That is all. Next, please? ;-) Thanks so much for the update. Dang, this is riveting!

[sprbitch1313]

Soon, soon...

[erinrua]

Plus I'm anxious to see what came of that conversation Sam and Dean finally had in Chapter 7. I mean ... it sounded promising. Sam finally talking. Dean finally hearing. I need them to reach towards being brothers again. *wibble*

And yeah. Rachel and the succubus. GAH!

But no pressure. None at all. *G*

[sprbitch1313]

Why, thank you.

[connery_is_bond]

I love this, I really do- I love how you're getting back to dedicating chapters to each Winchester child as they go through life, and I love that Maya is still lingering (just like her grandpa John that way) but you really need to focus on the Ava/Sam/Dean/Sarah thing and it needs to be resolved for my sake.

I mean I know the affair was wrong but give Ava some love here- she's a Winchester too- don't just throw her aside. If Sarah is letting Sam live at home some love for Ava doesn't seem out of the question, right?

Can't wait for the next chapter.

[sprbitch1313]

Ava's coming up...such patience you have. ;)

No, really, she'll be dealt with very soon, in the mean time, I just sort of picture off moping in a corner. But she's gonna have a big part to play yet. And I have to find a way to do something with her and Sarah, b/c I miss them together, and while I doubt they'll ever be the same, and I don't know if I even want them to be, that's definitely a relationship that needs to be addressed.

[connery_is_bond]

Patience? What is this patience you speak of?

LOL.

But seriously, I'm pretty much lacking with the patience.

Anyway it's good to hear that Ava has not been forgotten... and I'm pretty sure you are Sam Winchester, because you totally read my mind; I was wondering about Ava/Sarah because I adored their relationship and now I'm like, how are they going to hang out and have manicures together? You need to find some common ground and have them become friends(ish) again.

Please and thank-you (at least my manners are still good!)

[mlina]

I know I saw you updating on my flist but it did not register until today.

You have sucked me back into this. MOAR PLZ? ;-;

And here I thought I was done with SPN, lol. You brought the love back.

[sprbitch1313]

Done with Supernatural?! Actually, that was part of why I didn't update for so long...I was blocked, yes, but I was also rather...underwhelmed with Supernatural in general. Oh, well...now we're both back, yay!

[mlina]

*points to self* *has not been actively watching SPN since the end of season 2*

I dunno. This might sound utterly blasphemous, but Season 3 hasn't exactly hooked me. =X

But yes. Yay for being back into this and I am so glad you're updating. ;-; Have I ever mentioned how addictive this 'verse of your is??? I have mad, mad love for everyone in it.

[sprbitch1313]

Well, thank you...I find them all a bit addictive myself. And, yup, I know what you mean...I've been watching still, but I barely even remember any of this season's episodes...they were all just that...wonderful.