Fic: What it takes for xylodemon

May 12, 2012 17:43

Title: What it takes
Author: lyras
Recipient: xylodemon
Character(s): Hermione, Harry, Neville, Ron, Ginny and Luna
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: ~8,000
Warnings: Cruelty to a mouse in one section ("September").
Summary: In the year that Voldemort launches his attack on wizarding Britain, six people find hidden reserves and learn what is worth fighting for.
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2012, fic

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onehundredmoons May 17 2012, 02:18:26 UTC
Love this story - what a perfect structure for these vignettes. I'm especially fond of the Hermione July bookends. You write her so well!

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nundu_art May 22 2012, 15:43:58 UTC
This is so wonderful! Thank you!!

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snorkackcatcher May 22 2012, 22:26:12 UTC
Very nice indeed -- a convincing look at how these characters handled a terrible year.

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ext_1054020 May 31 2012, 14:03:51 UTC
Great work. I was thrown by the beginning of the second park, thought you would actually interweave the first war, but this was good.

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delphipsmith June 3 2012, 19:26:48 UTC
My favorite fics are those that fill in gaps, that let us see events from a different perspective, or witness things that were glossed over or happened off-page in the books, and you did it marvelously here. Great choice the way you structured it month by month, letting us see what was going on in various places that we could have only guessed at. Neville's standing up for the mouse and his speech, well, that was right up there with the best heroic actions ever (I love that he channeled his grandmother to help him do it!), and the insight into the emotions of Ginny and Luna was lovely. The ending was spot on, with Hermione preparing to tell the story -- which encompasses all of their stories -- to her parents. Really well done indeed.

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