Title: The Gift Author: lazy_neutrino Recipient: ani_bester Character(s): Neville, Luna, others Rating: PG Wordcount: 2100 Summary: A cancelled lesson has unexpected consequences for Neville. Author's Notes: I do hope you like this!
This is so sweet -- what a very "Nevilly" adventure. Lots of really good lines, this especially made me giggle:
Probably not. That sort of thing only happened to Harry.
Also, McGonagall is fantastic in this one -- you really get the sense of how scary she would have been for a twelve-year-old Neville. (And her "Test tomorrow"... hee!)
Wonderful! I love adventures that don't include Harry...not that I dislike Harry adventures, but I remember being in junior high and high school. I didn't go to a magical school and we still managed to get into a lot of adventures!
Very enjoyable. Strong characterizations for all of them, atmospheric magic, interesting canon connections, full of the sort of touches that help create a full world (Dumbledore's armchairs, McG's perfect "test tomorrow," the tower perspective of the "ants" below, the reassurance of Trevor, etc.) Great ending.
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Probably not. That sort of thing only happened to Harry.
Also, McGonagall is fantastic in this one -- you really get the sense of how scary she would have been for a twelve-year-old Neville. (And her "Test tomorrow"... hee!)
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I laughed out loud at this: And a bit about goblins. Quite a lot about goblins, actually. I think he jumps about, just to get more goblins in.
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