Fic: The Gift for ani_bester

May 15, 2012 05:51

Title: The Gift
Author: lazy_neutrino
Recipient: ani_bester
Character(s): Neville, Luna, others
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 2100
Summary: A cancelled lesson has unexpected consequences for Neville.
Author's Notes: I do hope you like this!

The Gift )

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fannyt May 16 2012, 06:23:21 UTC
This is so sweet -- what a very "Nevilly" adventure. Lots of really good lines, this especially made me giggle:

Probably not. That sort of thing only happened to Harry.

Also, McGonagall is fantastic in this one -- you really get the sense of how scary she would have been for a twelve-year-old Neville. (And her "Test tomorrow"... hee!)

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coervus May 16 2012, 22:07:04 UTC
This was totally delightful, I'm grinning now having finished reading it. :) Ah, Hogwarts!

I laughed out loud at this: And a bit about goblins. Quite a lot about goblins, actually. I think he jumps about, just to get more goblins in.

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pinkelephant42 May 19 2012, 14:16:29 UTC
I really enjoyed Neville and Luna in this. It's such a lovely story that suits them both perfectly. :D

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nundu_art May 21 2012, 01:11:20 UTC
Wonderful! I love adventures that don't include Harry...not that I dislike Harry adventures, but I remember being in junior high and high school. I didn't go to a magical school and we still managed to get into a lot of adventures!

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kellychambliss May 30 2012, 11:06:13 UTC
Very enjoyable. Strong characterizations for all of them, atmospheric magic, interesting canon connections, full of the sort of touches that help create a full world (Dumbledore's armchairs, McG's perfect "test tomorrow," the tower perspective of the "ants" below, the reassurance of Trevor, etc.) Great ending.

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