Missive for Lullabylily

Apr 27, 2011 06:54

Apologies for the unexpected interruption in the secret missives. Unfortunately, when you're a secret agent, life sometimes whisks you away without much notice. But rest assured, the bad guys are in prison, and the spies may now continue their celebrations!
(and France was beautiful)

Author: melusinahp
Recipient: Lullabylily
Title: Let It Be
Characters/Pairing: Yassen ( Read more... )

fic, 2011

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lullabylily April 27 2011, 06:44:52 UTC
YAY! This was such a lovely surprise!!! What a delicious story!!!
I do love it that Yassen has his genuine dark side and how Alex is forced to believe, for a moment, that he really is as evil and coldhearted as he appears to be. But then... god all my 'kink buttons', inexperienced Alex not really knowing what he wants, trying to take control but losing it mostly to Yassen...
he wasn't going to let Yassen dismiss him
Brilliant line! I do like to think of Alex as a bit of a petulant child when it comes to Yassen. Even though he masks it under 'wanting revenge', 'saving lives on missions' etc; he really just wants Yassen to notice him. As if Yassen's dismissal hurts more than Yassen torturing him.
God the sex scene. I loved how Yassen doesn't really take advantage of Alex but takes control all the same.
"You have too many scars for a boy your age."

"You're right. I'll send some back."
Love witty Alex ^^
Thank you so much for this story, mystery author ^^ It was brilliant!
P.S It could definitely use a sequel ^^

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k155_me April 27 2011, 10:54:59 UTC
The torture scene was simply yummy, and i loved the tension between Alex and Yassen at the end. Also "i'll send some back" was lol :)
Brilliantly done :)
And yeah this could be way more eloquent, but shrug, i tried :P

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shezan April 27 2011, 15:45:21 UTC
LOVELY!

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hpstrangelove April 27 2011, 16:34:30 UTC
This is such a yummy story. The torture at the beginning is so perfect. And I love the way how Alex can't just go up to the front door and knock.

You do a great job writing Alex - knowing so much yet still a petulant teen. And of course MI6 would be pulling the strings - they always do.

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hjbender April 27 2011, 19:32:31 UTC
Oh, Alex. Always getting into the wrong kind of trouble. (Really, when will that boy learn?)

Anyway, great story! Love how it jumped into the "good stuff" right from the get-go, and Yassen's cool, calculating patience coupled with Alex's hot, acidic hatred. Great dynamic those two have, and the ambiguous ending leaves so many possibilities open to the imagination. Best way to end any Y/A story, I'd say!

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