Comments | squirrelarmy: FIC: If You'll Be My Bodyguard (I Will Be Your Long Lost Pal)

squirrelarmy

FIC: If You'll Be My Bodyguard (I Will Be Your Long Lost Pal)

Aug 15, 2009 06:52

UMMM. Fanfic. cos I can.

and for those who actually read this lj and are all like, "uhhh WTF you haven't posted in FOREVER", well. uh.

yeah. :)

randomly, I'm going to China in two weeks for work. CRAZY RIGHT?

okay have Avatar fic now.

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Title: If You'll Be My Bodyguard (I Will Be Your Long Lost Pal)
Rating: PG-13 (for uh. language? or ( Read more... )

fic: toph is awesome, avatar

Comments 13

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squirrelarmy August 16 2009, 07:10:41 UTC

Yay, you read my story! ♥ I totally wasn't expecting anyone actually on my flist to read it, even if you've seen Avatar. :DDD

ypaladinofchaos August 15 2009, 16:15:13 UTC

Freakin' adorable. I love my Tokka, but admittedly BFF-ness is equally as awesome. Especially that last one.

Well done!

squirrelarmy August 16 2009, 07:14:09 UTC

Duuude, I love BFF!Tokka, but honestly, what I really want? Is OT3!BFF!Toph/Sokka/Aang. Because "The Runaway" is my favorite episode EVER and the three of them are freaking HILARIOUS together. When he's not super over-burdened by like, the fate of the world and whatnot, Aang is ridiculous and awesome, and totally goes along with everything Sokka and Toph come up with. While Zuko and Katara are just in the background, muttering in exasperation and giving each other significant "wtf are these guys ON?" looks. of awesome.

And thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you thought it well done.

artemisrae August 15 2009, 19:29:38 UTC

*flails* This is my favorite brand of Tokka, and I love the whole thing from beginning until end. I don't think I could pick a favorite section. Well done!

squirrelarmy August 16 2009, 07:15:30 UTC

Heee, I'm so glad you liked it! ♥ I'm definitely familiar with your fics too, so it's incredibly flattering to hear you say that you liked my story. :) Thank you so much!

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squirrelarmy August 16 2009, 07:21:11 UTC

Omg, I loved the finale! Toph and Sokka were so freaking cute and we got to see Awesome!Toph and Awesome!Sokka, as WELL as super adorable protective!Tokka. My favorite part of that whole sequence was how Sokka totally held Toph's hand like, the ENTIRE time. Even when they were running in the METAL ship. (I personally think it stems from Serpent's Pass -- after that one time where Sokka forgot about Toph and she wound up almost dying, I think he overcompensates now by making sure she's always with him during a battle. And I think this because it's SUPER CUTE.)

And I'm so glad you thought my dialogue was good! It's hard to get the good balance with those two, which is partially why I didn't want to mess with romantic!Tokka in this piece. It's difficult to pull of IC!romantic!Tokka in snippits, just because it's so far off from the show, age-wise.

tunxeh August 16 2009, 19:14:19 UTC

It's been a while since I read much Avatar fic, but I enjoyed this one. A lot of cute scenes in it, but I think my favorite was the one with Suki and the handbag shopping.

squirrelarmy August 17 2009, 05:47:23 UTC

Ha, I'm glad that I was able to tempt you back to Avatar fanfic for a moment, and that it was worth it for you. :) And I love Suki and Sokka together (as well as Tokka, to be honest; both couples are cute in different ways), though I imagine they would fight a bit once the romancy goopy period wore off. :D Thank you so much for your review!