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[star_chase]

untitled (or Dear Nostalgia)
rating: PG
fandom: Super Junior
pairing: Zhou Mi/Kyuhyun
summary: Back then, everything had been left to a smile.
notes: this is for kyuppuccino who apparently has magical powers. Prompts were 'angsty and desperate but happy ending'. I...don't even know. AU, and illogical, being as I imagined this in the 1800's. 1800's England.

Comments

[kyuppuccino]

Years. It has been years, since they were at school together, since he last saw Kyuhyun’s face, heard his voice, saw his smile. Since he had last touched him, or told him...told him..
This totally broke my heart, I want to cry. Sad Zhou Mi. T-T

It's so beautifully written, I am in awe. ilusm ♥ really, thank you T-T the story is wonderfully painful, and the last lines made me cry (I am such a crybaby LOL). This is one of the best fics someone's ever written for me.

Dear, I think my dogsitter prompt was lost in communication ♥ new fic? X^D

[kyuppuccino]

I really love this T_T ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[star_chase]

You wanted some angst :( I'm a little afraid that it wasn't quite the happy ending you wanted, but then anything I could think of was a little too cliche so XD;;

AWWW I didn't want you to cry! But I'm really really pleased if you liked it then, since it was for you! thank you~ ♥♥♥!

and, ohmygod, the dogsitter prompt was giving me weird ideas (like...one of them actually being a dog) and, I don't think you want that XDDDD

[kyuppuccino]

That was perfectly fine ♥ I told you I love it. ;_; It was different from what I usually read. So thank you veryveryvery much ♥♥♥♥♥

LOL OH GOD NO. I'm not into zoophilia(?) D: but! if you ever have some free time, I'm still willing to read a dogsitter ficcie ♥ you could make Kyuhyun a very clumsy dogsitter who almost loses Mimi's dog :D ..and then angsty arguments ensue. *dies*

[meiface]

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MICA I LOVE YOU SO HARD. WHY DON'T YOU WRITE MORE?

This was so sad but so sweet and the memories were so amazing and wishful and I want that for them, but it's been so long and I am so sad. Except I am also all heartbreakingly happy over the ending. ♥♥

;___________________; I LIKE THIS SO MUCH.

[star_chase]

MEI. I LOVE YOUR COMMENT. SO MUCH WHAT. I kind of flail and die!! And I'm reallyreallyreally pleased that you liked this, especially since I'm still not sure I can do the QMi sufficent justice so yay thank you thank you for reading! YOU MAKE ME A HAPPY MICA!!!! ♥♥♥

[aznk_popaddict]

Oh, this was so sad T^T

It was really so sweet how he was remembering their time together...*sniff*

And Kyuhyun's letter at the end *so sweet*

I really love this :D

[star_chase]

Thank you so much for reading! I'm really pleased that you liked it :D

[kim_hae_eun]

wow it's so sad but beautifullly written!

poor zhou mi
are you going to write a sequel so we get see kyuhyun's side of the story??

[star_chase]

thank you very much, I'm really pleased that you think so!

And honestly, I don't really do sequels, and I never even thought of anything beyond this particular scene, so I don't think I'll be doing Kyuhyun's side of things. But thank you very much for reading! :D

[kim_hae_eun]

awww ohh well!
your welcome! i liiked it!

[jenlovesmi]

I believe I have read this one-shot before, but I guess I didn't leave a comment last time. I think your work is exceptional. I wish I had friends to write stories for me, but oh well.

I don't know what type of comments you preferred, but I hope to make a good one to your satisfaction. Writing style, I love it. Makes me jealous of all you Kyumi writers, since most Kyumi stories I have read are very good. Sure it might not be as angsty as you wanted, but I think if it would have been angsty, the story would have turned out vastly different. Your usage of Similes, I like it. Your style of writing seems calculated, which is also great. There are good writers, but not very many can calculate their writing and make it good for the reader.
I don't know what else to say, but great story, it really made me feel for Zhou Mi. I loved the ending, very touching.

[star_chase]

This is the kind of comment I love receiving, knowing what I'm doing right for people, so thank you very much for taking the time to tell me what you liked! And you know, I'm really very flattered that you're grouping me in with the KyuMi writers, I've only (not counting anonymous smut memes >>) written for them twice, and a lot of the other KyuMi writers really do it so well, so I'm all flattered and sghfksld XD;;

Really, thank you so much for taking the time, I really appreciate it, and I'm really really pleased that you liked this!

And on the point of getting fics for yourself, you must have some friends you can convince to write for you! It's really quite easy (especially if you're friends with people who are easy to convince >>)

thank you again!