[fic] part three

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title: The Fifth Trial
rating: PG
fandom: Super Junior
pairing: Zhou Mi/Kyuhyun
summary: The life of a Jedi is never a simple one and Zhou Mi, alongside his unruly, new apprentice, must learn how to handle all the situations this life can throw at them. Even the unexpected ones.

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[star_chase]

This was all because of you! So as long as you're pleased, I AM PLEASED, and that to me is perfect!! I had so much fun writing this ajfhjskdam

UGH.

[wobaozhewo]

... I have never even watched Star Wars before.

But... you completely sucked me into this strange world. and this fic makes me wanna watch it. :| And now I know what people are talking about when they talk about the Force xD

Star Wars au has GOT to be the most amazing thing to happen to QMi in a long time :| ilu and thank you for writing this.

[star_chase]

I am so immensely pleased that you wanted to read this giant even when you had no idea about the world it was set in! I was really trying to make it readable for those who aren't as geeky as I am, so I'm pleased that it seemed to do that!

Thank you so much for reading this giant, ilu for that! XD ♥

also: WATCH THE MOVIES. They are amazing *~*

[wobaozhewo]

The qmi calls to me? :| (And well-written longfic at that XD)

I don't know when I'll get to watch the movies (aren't there... a lot of them? x_x), but when I do, I'll probably be thinking of THIS the entire time XD

You win... at life :D

[star_chase]

The QMi calls to us all! I don't think I could have written a novella like this about any other pairing than them XD

And yes, there are 6 movies in total! But the original trilogy (with Luke) are the three better movies! Although the 3 prequels have more awesome Jedi and epic lightsaber duels! Now I want to watch them again XD

[phasera]

Just wanted to let you know I read it and it's amazing and I'll be back with a better comment once I've properly digested it all! ^-^♥

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I'M SORRY IT'S SO MASSIVELY LONG! But thank you fhskdklakf amazing is a word that makes me giddy! :D

[phasera]

okay i've given up on trying to write the most perfect comment ever YOU GET MY INCOHERENT BABBLING OKAY?

"Really, Master, you're lucky that I had the time to come and save your behind, yet again." Kui Xian's tone was dry, and the familiar sound of it felt good to Zhou Mi, after weeks of not hearing it. "What would you have done if I'd happened to be busy?"

Zhou Mi managed a laugh. He'd missed this easy, dry, humour of Kui Xian's. Even if it was a little boastful most of the time. "I actually had a plan in the making," he assured.

Kui Xian turned and shot him a smile of his own. "Right, I'm sure."

THIS. TIMES A THOUSAND. SO PERFECT. SO QMI.

It hadn't happened right away. Zhou Mi had walked away from him, from what Kui Xian had tried to show him. He'd had to show Zhou Mi, more than once, before he'd given in. It wasn't something they could outrun, and Zhou Mi had finally seemed to realise this, in the dark determination of Kui Xian's eyes, between warm searching lips and racing heartbeats and fingers threaded together. It would be

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Your comment was already fine and there is no need to be forgiven but but dhfjsldjaska omg Becca, this is LONG and you tell me such wonderful things and I feel so happy and GOOD INSIDE and skjfbsdksfdm I really think that you're so good yourself and you read so many other good books and I'm just so dkjaldk that you liked this! Thank you thankkkk yoooou *~* ♥♥

and I will try to aim for happier next time! >_>

[meiface]

Sobbing, Mica. Oh Mica, I don't know Star Wars at all, I really don't. But you wrote it and you love it and you love Qmi - and it shows through all 30000+ words of this fic. I am so impressed by your epic, so impressed by how you managed to capture both Zhou Mi and Kyuhyun despite their being Jedi.

I see your bias all over Donghae and fuck I love him too, so hard. Why is he perfect. :(

Oh Mica, the ending broke my heart. I knew it would have to end that way even as Kyuhyun tried to help them run away into the stars and chase their happily-ever-after. It's so tragic. ;______; I just want my Qmi to be happy together, forever.

But so, so much ♥ for this.

[meiface]

I TOTALLY DID. ;____; I cry so easily at fics alskjfsk heartbreaking.

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It wasn't supposed to be this long, Mei! IT WASN'T jdskfkdskdk but omg, I'm really amazed to have people who don't know Star Wars still reading through this epic and I hope it made sense for you? I was trying very very hard to not be a know-it-all geek and make it understandable for everyone!

Oh god Donghae has a background and everything, even though he didn't get to be in the fic much fhskfjhsnd the bias, we can't escape it!!! :(

But really ohmygod I'm so fhjsldkls over you reading this huge monster and commenting and I didn't mean to break your heart but thank yoooooou ;__; ♥♥♥

[cleverlilwill]

Ohgod. *SOB* My icon just makes the heartache worse. I too don't know much about Star Wars, but this had me so entranced from the very beginning. The emotion! You did such a beautiful job capturing every moment. Their intense gazes, a brush of a hand, even the smallest of touches... UGH. I got chills every time I sensed trouble ahead and I definitely started to tear up more than once. Oi, I could go on rambling, but I'll stop myself.

Much love to all the other characters too though~! Concerned Geng and Siwon made me smile~

[star_chase]

I'm so very excited that even people who don't know Star Wars can read and enjoy this! Especially because, essentially, it's a story about QMi, not so much Star Wars. Rambling or not, thank you so much for reading, and I'm so pleased that you liked it!