[fic] part two

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Title: Walk All Over You
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: SHINee
Pairing: Onew/Minho
Wordcount: 15,855
Summary: The thing Jinki does best: embarrass himself. This is that story.

part one

Comments

[anonymous]

DEAD.
THIS
GOOD.
GOOD JOB.
*sudden urge to build you a temple*

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ohmygod thank you so much, I think onho should have a temple built to them instead though, and we can all donate with lovely onho fics ;;

thank you SO MUCH for reading and commenting, I appreciate it so much! ♥

[oconje]

Omg, this was so good...so cute and funny. Your shy, bumbling Onew is so endearing and quietly confident handsome Minho so attractive. This is your first Onho? I really hope its not your last but thankful you wrote Onho anyways! I really hope there is a part 3 where Onho gets together together if you know what I mean.

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aw thank you so much! I have a real thing for endearingly embarrassing onew, I cannot help it ;; and yes, this was my first shinee fic of any kind, so I was really nervous about it! I'm so glad you liked it, thank you so much for reading and commenting! This made my day! (it won't be my last onho, they are my otp ;~;) I don't think there will be a part 3 though, I don't really write smut ;;

again, thank you so much for reading! ♥

[k_pop4life]

i really really wish i could quote my favorite parts but i love everything about this so i would just be quoting the whole thing. FORGIVE ME FOR THIS INCOHERENT COMMENT BECAUSE I AM A MESS BUT IT'S TECHNICALLY YOUR FAULT BECAUSE THIS FIC IS SO FUCKING GOOD! JESUS I DONT EVEN KNOW WHAT TO TELL YOU! HOW DO YOU HONESTLY EXPECT ME TO LEAVE YOU A COHERENT COMMENT AFTER READING THIS

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gfgshfgahdajlajd I have NO IDEA HOW TO RESPOND TO THIS COMMENT omg this comment is so long and so beautiful and so full I just, I just love you and it and I don't know how to respond to this overwhelming lovelyness, thank you so much ;;

MINHO IS A WET DREAM IN THAT SHINE OUTFIT dhdjadakld (and now I am annoyed this description never occured to me before you said it ;;) and oh god, I'm kind of tempted to write a scene of onew secretly trying the costumes are WHY DIDN'T I THINK OF THAT THAT WOULD BE SO FUNNY T___T

I want to write all the onho, forever, because they are my perfect otp ;; I am so glad you enjoyed this, and again, thank you SO MUCH for reading and commenting, this really did make my day and I don't know how to properly say thank you for this wonderful comment ;; ♥

[k_pop4life]

YOU ARE VERY FUCKING WELCOME! and can you please do it! YOU WAtched THE VIDEO JINKI LOOKS GOOD IN A CAP AND BOOTS TOO COME ON WOMAN GIVE IN TO YOUR DESIRES! YOU KNOW YOU WANT TO DO IT YOU KNOW HOW FUNNY AND BEAUTIFUL IT WOULD BE. YOU SHOULD TOTALLY DO IT. YES? YEAH lmao he would probably fail so hard and minho would just laugh so hard but he would still be turned on because it's jinki and yeah

PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR THAT.

i am just going to add you as a friend because i need you in my life with these onho fics

FOR THE RECORD YOU WERE THE ONE THAT MADE MY DAY YOU BEAUTIFUL PERSON YOU ♥

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YES I AGREE ONEW LOOKED JUST AS AMAZING IN HIS CAP AND BOOTS HFGAGFGAJDHADN I...may at some point write some additional scenes for this now because dammit, it's a good idea you had and it would be HILARIOUS. OH GOD SO AWKWARD AND ONEW WOULD DIE BUT IT WOULD BE ADORABLE.

ugh thank you so much for your encouragement!! this is my first attempt at shinee but I definitely want to keep writing for them, and help fly the onho flag of wonderfulness ;; I AM A SLOW WRITER DON'T COUNT ON ANYTHING OK T___T

ugh again thank you so much ahfhakdkakd YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL TOO OKAY ;; ♥

[kpopforlife]

This is like my favorite thing ever. I don't even know what is going on right now but I'm sitting at work with a stupid cheesy smile on my face over the preciousness and just never let this end. I need awkward snarky Onho bbs in my life forever.

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hahaha thank you so much and I'm really glad you liked it! I love onho so hard, I need them in my life forever, they're too wonderful and fun to write about ;; thank you so much for reading and commenting! ♥

[koukaiaru]

it's been so long since i last read a good and satisfying onho ;~~~;. this is so good, and omg ever since i first saw shinee performing shine in those outfits, and those boots, omg the boots i wanted, no wait, i needed someone to write about it and oh god i never imagined a stripper minho but it makes so much sense, so much sense, the tight pants, the boots, the everything, my only regret now is that shinee didn't strip during their performances OTL. awkward jinki is so adorably awkward and minho that smug little bitch omg. i have so many feels from this fic you can't even imagine. precious onho bbies. and the lap dance oh god the lap dance. i'd die if i was jinki with a lap full of minho in those boots /nosebleed. i just... thank you for writing this. i didn't even know how much i needed it until i read it. booooooooots.

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I KNOW RIGHT? I was waiting for people to write about the boots and then nothing happened so I was just like FINE. I WILL WRITE A FIC ABOUT THE BOOTS. I wish they'd stripped on stage too cause omg, those outfits were too sexy ;; it was so hard to write about that lapdance because I had to IMAGINE IT and words are hard when you're imagining minho being a sex god in tall sexy boots ;;

ugh thank you for reading and commenting!! this comment is so lovely really, I was so nervous to share this ahfjakdka you have made me so happy, thank you ♥