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FIC: Part 2 - Demand

May 14, 2008 19:21

Title: Part 2 - Demand
Author: starfirefic
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters: Owen, Jack
Word Count: ~2,000ish
Genre: Kink, pure and simple (oh, alright, there may be some character stuff in there too)
Rating: Definite NC-17
Beta: The incomparable riftugee (without whom there'd be a lot more monologue, and a lot less Jacktion)

Author's Notes:Written as the second part of ( Read more... )

nc-17, kink, jack h, owen

Comments 45

dwolf34 May 14 2008, 13:27:52 UTC

Very nice, thank you! And worth the wait. (And my greedy little recently converted fangirl self says "More, please?")

starfirefic May 15 2008, 08:08:14 UTC

Very glad you enjoyed - thanks for the kind words.

Yeah, there's possibly another part planned, *if* I can get my damned Comms Management assignment done, and *if* the muse doesn't decide to desert me.

I'm kind of at a nerve-wracking point with this now, because thus far, I've been able to avoid getting graphic (physically) with any of the description. If Part 3 happens, I think it's going to need to go places I haven't been before with my writing, so yeah... nerves are definitely there.

But if I can write it, I promise I will.

Thanks for the feedback!

dwolf34 May 15 2008, 14:56:17 UTC

Advice, sympathy and support are yours if you want them. You already have a great beta, don't get me wrong, please. Just saying - I've been writing graphic BDSM for a while, know you can pull it off, and would be honored to be your cheering section and help you through the rough parts. Like someone did for me when I was in your position.

And yeah, okay, got to admit that I'm dying to see where you go with this!

starfirefic May 18 2008, 01:27:37 UTC

Thank you, I may yet take you up on that.

I had some thoughts yesterday about where the next piece might go from here, and I've actually managed to get some study done this weekend, so who knows... Part 3 might yet end up happening.

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doctorinchains May 14 2008, 13:36:52 UTC

Wow.....just wow.....
::mimics Owen's stance on knees and begs you for more::

starfirefic May 15 2008, 08:08:59 UTC

Heh - glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the feedback.

There may indeed be more (see comment above) - muse-and-assignment-allowing!

demand deadeven May 14 2008, 14:07:44 UTC

Please tell me that there's a part 3

Re: demand starfirefic May 15 2008, 08:10:29 UTC

*grins* - ummmmm... not yet, but it's a definite possibility (see above comments)

I suspect I'm going to have to go off an read a whole load of well-written kinkpr0n before I try to write it though... from this point on, it takes my writing into *entirely* uncharted waters....

ksmeg May 14 2008, 14:51:58 UTC

Awww, this is just lovely. So true to each character and the dynamic between them. And well written to boot. Can't wait for the next bit.

starfirefic May 15 2008, 08:12:54 UTC

Thanks so much for the kind words - I'm glad it struck you as true to character. It's definitely the way the Owen in my mind reacted... and while this nastiness isn't *all* of the complexity that is Canon!Jack (at least the way I see him), it's still a solid part of who he is and what he's been.

So yeah - it was fun putting the two of them together.

As for the next bit... I promise, if the muse allows (and I don't get scared off by having to go into entirely new territories with my writing) , I'll try to make it happen.

Thanks again for the feedback!

xanister May 14 2008, 17:20:00 UTC

More please? I'm not beyond begging!

Owen/Jack like this is a really good dynamic and entirely plausible. :)

starfirefic May 15 2008, 08:14:07 UTC

Thank you... one of the things that really makes me feel relieved is when people tell me the character dynamics ring true for them... so I really appreciate the feedback (grin... and see above comments regarding Part 3!)