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FIC: Part 2 - Demand

May 14, 2008 19:21

Title: Part 2 - Demand
Author: starfirefic
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters: Owen, Jack
Word Count: ~2,000ish
Genre: Kink, pure and simple (oh, alright, there may be some character stuff in there too)
Rating: Definite NC-17
Beta: The incomparable riftugee (without whom there'd be a lot more monologue, and a lot less Jacktion)

Author's Notes:Written as the second part of ( Read more... )

nc-17, kink, jack h, owen

Comments 45

mummybeare May 14 2008, 18:00:32 UTC

I can't breathe. I never thought I'd have gone for this pairing. But wow...

starfirefic May 15 2008, 08:21:13 UTC

*laughs, and hands you an oxygen bag*

Yeah... the whole Jack/Owen thing strikes people in different ways. For some it just doesn't work as a concept for any number of reasons. Alas, for me, levels of Teh HAWT are inversely proportional to levels of tension: and since Jack and Owen seem to have the most tension per interaction of pretty much any characters on the show (well, they seem that way to me, anyway ;-)... yeah, they just kinda strike me as hot.

Heh... and it's always more of a compliment to get positive feedback from someone who wouldn't have ordinarily gone for the pairing you've written, so thank you for the feedback!

kitsune_flame May 14 2008, 19:00:57 UTC

*mops up the drool* Hot. That's all my brain can think of right now. Hm, can't wait for more!

starfirefic May 15 2008, 08:26:36 UTC

Heh... *hands you a towel*

Glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for commenting. See comment to dwolf34 above about the next part... I promise to try!

anonymous May 14 2008, 21:21:34 UTC

xcellent, not on this site yet but please, please, please write some more am dieing to know what happens next your characterization is top notch.

starfirefic May 15 2008, 08:26:52 UTC

Thank you for the feedback!

autumnrae89 May 15 2008, 01:47:55 UTC

Oh yes.

I love this, it could have been taken in so many (not as good) ways and would have lost a lot of realism for me. But the use of the pendant from Greek's Bearing Gifts was awesome.

I also join the line labelled 'Part 3!'

starfirefic May 15 2008, 08:31:10 UTC

Thanks for the feedback - I'm glad the idea of Tosh's pendant worked for you. When I first started thinking about writing this, the first thing I did was IM my beta-par-extraordinaire, riftugee, and say "Quick! Help! How could Owen have found out about Jack's scene with the wounded villager?? And how could Jack work out how Owen feels about that? Help!"

We batted ideas back and forth before I settled on the idea of Owen having had to have debriefed the villagers afterwards... and then the pendant just kinda jumped out at me as an already-validated-in-canon way of allowing Jack to take liberties with Owen's mental processes. I'm glad it worked!

Thanks again for the kind words, and I promise I'll at least *try* to attempt a Part 3

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starfirefic May 15 2008, 08:38:18 UTC

Thanks hon - as usual, don't underestimate how much of a role you played in the finished product - both through enthusiasm for things as they are already (so I know what to amp up), and letting me know what isn't working as well ( ... )