FIC: Part 1 - Denial

[starfirefic]

Title: Part 1 - Denial
Author: starfirefic
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters: Owen, Jack
Word Count: ~600
Genre: Dark, angsty pr0n
Rating: Definite NC-17
Beta: The mutli-talented riftugee

Author's Notes:Written in response to a prompt from karaokegal for a Jack/Owen BDSM prompt. It didn't turn out as BDSMy as I wanted, but I'm really hoping that Part 2 will fix that...
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Comments

[shane_mayhem]

Oh man this is awesome! Can't wait for more! :D

You should x-post this to twojacksandowen, too! They'd love it! :D

[starfirefic]

Thanks so much for the kind words, and yes, I'm working on the next part at the moment. It's... a little more BDSM-y than this piece ended up being... I'm just trying to fit it around assignments and other pesky RL things ;-)

Thanks again for the feedback!

[starfirefic]

Oh, and I forgot to mention - yep, I've posted it to the twojacks com - thanks for the suggestion - hopefully folks there will like it!

[beguiled_child]

Ooh nice! More soon? *hopeful smile*

[starfirefic]

Thank you for commenting - yes, if I can, I'm hoping to have the next part done within the next couple of days...

[xanister]

More soon please?

I almost never like Owen/Jack fics (I'm Janto through and through) but your writing is in the exception!

Can't wait to read more

[starfirefic]

Thank you so much for the compliment - it's especially cool given that you're not an Owen/Jack fan!

I'll do my best to get the next part up soon!

[invisible_lift]

Ooh. I like this. This has serious, serious potential.

I'll be in my bunk.

[starfirefic]

Wow, thank you! Yeah, I'm not sure how well I'm going to be able to deliver on the potential (I seem to have a talent for setting scenes up, but never quite manage to follow through on them - I started a Jack/Gwen D/s piece late last year that I just couldn't get to move past the point where Gwen actually consented :-S)

But I just finished the first draft of the second part of this last night at oh-god-hundred-early-o'clock, and if I can just get my final Comms Management assignment done, I'll be able to do some serious editing work on it before it's ready to go to my beta for the wonders she always manages to work on it.

Thanks again for the feedback!

[bloodinmytea]

Ooooh. I think I'm your newest fan.
and we all seem to be starting our comments our with "oh" don't we?

[starfirefic]

Squee! Thank you for the compliment :-D!

And I'll take the feedback starting with 'oh' as being a compliment of an even higher order of magnitude.

Glad you enjoyed reading, and thanks again for taking the time to comment.

[bloodinmytea]

Always :]