"I'll be your everlasting.."

Oct 07, 2003 00:07

11:50 pm. -- right now I'm crying.

I cry every time one of us leaves after the weekend, throughout which we've been blissfully ignorant that is has to end. I usually make it to the hour before I have to leave or he does before I start crying.. and as hard as I try not to, and as often as I swallow the knot getting bigger in my throat, and blink ( Read more... )

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keithmcnally October 6 2003, 23:14:16 UTC
I love the way you wrote that. The two halves the same general size, both three paragraphs, and the extra phrase at the end. Then those two time signatures framing it on either end. It's almost like a poem that's not a poem, that's such a cool way to format it.

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glamstarlette October 6 2003, 23:54:03 UTC
Smiles = so much more valuable than the tears.

And besides, you guys are CUTE!!

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five_speed October 7 2003, 19:04:29 UTC
Hey, are you still coming to Ann Arbor? I have a bunch of shit to do Saturday during the day, but I'll totally be free Saturday night. Give me a call!

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