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Jan 16, 2008 19:11

☣skipped a beat.
PG | MISTAKE | 486
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challenge: 100situations, fandom: death note

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stargrind January 18 2008, 03:57:13 UTC

Thank you! It's always fun to let your mind run free when you're given free reign, like what DN did with Matt&Mello. :3 ♥

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stargrind January 18 2008, 04:08:22 UTC

They tend to take over people's brains, yeah. xD

Oh, of course! I don't mind at all. &I'm really glad you liked 'em! They were fun to write. :D

darkluna January 18 2008, 17:22:03 UTC

Wow. I love the style of this. That first paragraph hits so hard. Intense and lovely.

stargrind January 18 2008, 17:26:47 UTC

Thank you! The first paragraph is my favorite part of this whole piece. ♥

miyamashi January 21 2008, 11:51:54 UTC

Wow, this is beautiful. Painful, and beautiful. I especially loved the description of the news. It was such a lie, the way they portrayed it...so terrible, and you caught it just right.

The style of this was simply gorgeous, too. You said so much, in so few words. Kudos.

slvrsolealchmst January 29 2008, 18:08:04 UTC

Wow, that was amazing. And really hit kind of hard. Probably because of the punky, in your face style. You didn't sugarcoat anything. I liked this. My favorite bit was your description of Matt as "one fool that dared just a little too hard." Something in my stomach tightened, and I swallowed and just went, "Damn," and tried not to start yelling at the guys that gunned him down and then dared make a show of the spectacle. Augh. Nicely done.