hurricane [12/12]

[starwithoutrain]

title: hurricane
author: hika_nishi
pairing: masuda/tegoshi
rating: pg-13
disclaimer: I own the computer I typed this on. That's it.
summary: Five years ago, he would have thought today was going to be terrible, but after what he’d been through, nothing in his life could be that bad, not out here in the real world.
note: sequel to Beautiful World. Most of

Comments

[yuukarin]

Throw some in for my amusement, too >.>; I'm so excited! xD

omg its over
and it was beautiful
like, I'm tearing up...
he was silenced by what that jackass did...
thats terrible
and the first time he spoke again was to wish massu a happy birthday...
thats so romantic!!!
thank you so much ;-; these two together (YES WE KNOW WHO WE ARE) were definitely your best... no, the best.. so touching~

but yes
your story should have H!P in it.
if its crime drama throw in a Maasa. She kinda looks the part amirite? XD

ily <3 thanks so much for this! Really!

[hika_nishi]

♥♥♥♥
It took me a long time to figure out when to make Tego start taking again. His birthday seemed sweet and romantic and since I love that kind of stuff, I went with it XD
omg, Thank you Thank you♥♥

Maasa does look like she fit in that kind of atmosphere for some reason XD I'll throw her in if she can fit somewhere, since I think she's awesome♥

[meli_29]

Hika~ don't be sad ;_;
You did it great ;_;
really, too great ;_;
*tears*
omg~ Beautiful World and Hurricane are the best fics I read ever... I think... I'm going to cry xD... but,in a special way, you know... Happy, because this ending doesn't fail at all♥. And sad, because I'm going to miss the story ;_;
Well u_u... good things has to end *acceptance*

But really, I'm very charmed by such a sweet form in which you finished this.

Thanks god, beer exist xD. When I read Yuya was holding Takahisa when he got drunk, I was happy again, I was missing their kisses and romance♥ and everything went better with time. I love the fact Takahisa could know what Yuya wanted to say without words, the funny reaction of Teshi when Massu said that of the hospital but the best was when Yuya spoke again... just for say happy birthday for his love, that was too tender♥... and the next was too hot xD (you know what I like xDD).

About Ryo, Pi and Shige... you really made them so good friends of tegomass :D and more! you did it! nishikato♥~ (they are my

[hika_nishi]

I think you praise me more than I deserve XD ♥♥♥♥
you made me lol with that "thank god for beer" line XD
Tegomass's romance is just so nice, isn't it?♥

haha, I've known I wanted to bring in nishikato for a while♥ but I didn't commit to it until I decided to bring ryo back XD They are like a family. One big, odd, crazy family.

*huggles~*

[yumiko_okahawa]

Oh god, while reading I just thought all the time "How the hell is she going to turn this into a happy end

[hika_nishi]

my final chaps are usually like that, aren't they? XD
I actually considered sending Tego back to the institution...but that doesn't tie everything off nicely. And I want Tegomass sweetness XD

I wanted to put nishikato in since Shige came back XD I wouldn't say he'd forget because that's to sad :( More like move on. (lol)

Thank you! loves~♥♥♥♥

[momonyan]

Woaaaaah, this ended so cutely <33333 I'm kind of sad that it's over, but I really enjoyed reading it! Seriously, tis story almost made me cry at times, and made me smile and laugh^^ Just amazing <33
And I just have to say that I LOVE your Pi, always commenting about them making out XD
AMAZING work with this story, I'm looking forward to the next one <33

[hika_nishi]

♥I'm glad you liked it :D
I like writing Pi like that XD He's fun.
THANK YOU!~♥♥♥♥

[naturalwhite]

it's over T_______________T
*cries.....*
no, i'm really crying :'(
although it's a happy ending...
waaaaaaaaaaa....ur story always been so beautiful.
please keep up writing ♥♥♥ love u~

[hika_nishi]

no crying, it's a happy end :)
Thanks so much♥♥