in my darkest hour, you shine [one-shot]

[starwithoutrain]

title: in my darkest hour, you shine
author: hika_nishi
pairing: masuda/tegoshi
rating: r
disclaimer: I own the computer I typed this on. That's it.
summary: We’ll be together forever, right?

Comments

[treegonometry]

UWAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ;____________________;
If hurricane didn't make me cry enough THIS definitely did the trick. AHG SO TRAGIC. ;___;
I really love the realism in this, and the things like Tegoshi saying Massu's line, and OH THE CONTRAST ;__________;

oddly enough, i really like this line.
His legs feel odd, like the blood is starting to freeze in his veins.

AHH I NEED TO READ THAT, *__________________*

[hika_nishi]

if it made people that sad, I guess I didn't fail as much as I thought :)
lol, that line is totally based on real life. only way I could think to describe that weird feeling...
Thank You♥

[momonyan]

You did it again! You managed to write a wonderful fic that made me smile and almost cry!
The part with the two of them as kids just made me "aaaaaaaaaaw <33333" when i read it, I imagined the two of them like really cute kids <333

When it bacame tragic, I felt so sad, because they still want to be with each other, and they didn't have anyone to ask help of ;________;

The ending was so sad ;_________; But still like...beautifully sad, because they loved each other until the very end <333

Splendid job with this one, I totally loved it <3333

[hika_nishi]

I like writing those juxtapositions between happy times and sad ones...
I'm sure they were cute as kids (sometimes I think Tego still is one XD)
Thanks so much♥♥

[meli_29]

oh no, I can't believe this

I'm so sad...
I was hoping it turned good but when it looked like they were going to die... I... I cried ;_;
Really, this was beautiful and sad. It's your first tegomass with a tragic end! You did it great! Now I'm depressed... I don't want to study for my next exam xDDD

Out of jokes... I like your oneshot so much, it was short but has a lot of emotions and... I don't have a very long English vocabulary but... I had liked to be in this storie xD! To imagine them this way give me desire of embracing them and to take care of them.... their unconditional love was perfect. Thank you very much hikanishi~
and... I'm so sorry I didn't comment you in Decay but I read it, I'm attentive to your updates so... I'm really sorry about that, but again, you did it so good, thank you dear♥

[hika_nishi]

I said I'd do it one day...
This is like, the opposite ending to the Tegomass cuteness I love...but at least they're together.
Tegomass needed some serious hugs♥
That's okay, dear♥
Thank You♥♥

[meli_29]

thanks to you ^^♥

[shingung]

waaaaaahh...so sad....and depressing...

the chibi tegomass was so cute....

you always tugged my heart whenever i read your fics...

thanks for sharing...

hmmm your post icon..is that tegoshi?

[hika_nishi]

since it's tegomass, there has to be some cuteness :) even it ends up ;__;

yep, that's Tego ;)

Thank You♥!

[eightroses]

T_______________________________________T
that ending really killed me. ;w;
ahh, i love your fics so much♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
(this reminds me again i need to update mine. orz)

[hika_nishi]

Thanks so much♥♥♥♥
(lol. maybe if I write enough fics that remind you, you'll have to update XD)

[eightroses]

LOL IKR. I was actually thinking of one of your fics yesterday and thought how I need to update. D: It'll happen... someday. orz