My Favorite Game [3/?]

Sep 04, 2011 14:37


My Favorite Game [3/?]Pairing: Belldom
Rating: PG13 for now
Type: AU
Summary: Matt and Dom have a lot of history between them including a couple of countries and brushes with the law.
Feedback: Yes, I will really need it for this. I welcome the critical.
Disclaimer: None of this ever happened. The story belongs to me, but the real people do not. No ( Read more... )

fic: my favorite game, belldom

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aka_demon72 September 4 2011, 21:53:24 UTC

this just keeps getting better and better xD
and the layout is really good too ^__^

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stilettoxmafia September 4 2011, 22:05:59 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you guys have handled the peeling back the layers so well. I just don't want you guys to get frustrated or bored and quit!

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aka_demon72 September 5 2011, 09:51:38 UTC
haha yeh it's really interesting to read ^__^
i was a tad confused at first but i think i've got it now.. =)

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stilettoxmafia September 5 2011, 16:03:31 UTC
Don't worry, I was a bit confused writing it myself at first...

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ex_shayunkn September 4 2011, 21:58:06 UTC
still loving it so much. Dom and Matt are breaking my poor heart. I wanna give Matt a big hug, which is strange...

fantastic job! Can't wait for more.

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stilettoxmafia September 4 2011, 22:14:27 UTC
I'm sorry! You gotta crack a few eggs to make an omelette...I'm glad you still have an affection for Matt and want to hug him. He has his charm, doesn't he?

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ms_belle10 September 4 2011, 22:08:25 UTC
This is me, reserving my place in line for when I'm not at Alyson's. <3333333

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stilettoxmafia September 4 2011, 22:24:26 UTC
I suppose I will ALLOW place holding. Because I like you so much.

That's a pretty spicy icon you got there...

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ms_belle10 September 5 2011, 00:51:04 UTC
Why, thank you. I feel honored.

I know, right? Look at those two filthy bitches. Dom is trying to mount Matt in an airport and Matt's all, "Ugh, not in public". True sluts.

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stilettoxmafia September 5 2011, 01:14:08 UTC
Adventurous things!

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easilyglorious September 4 2011, 22:33:46 UTC
Brilliant, as always! I'm loving each side of the story, it makes me learn more about each character though seeing different points of view. I find myself unable to hate Matt for what he did, but unable to blame Dom for not wanting anything to do with him anymore. Hard one!

Honorary mentions to (i) The Raven, seriously inspired nickname, and (ii) you set my soul alight, you tryin' to kill me already?

Lovin it!

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stilettoxmafia September 4 2011, 22:53:43 UTC
Ahw thanks. Yes, I'm actually attempting character development for once, a rarity for me. Switching up the viewpoints has been interesting and a welcome change for writing. It keeps me going.

The two are in a tough spot, the deeper we go, the more complicated it is. No one is in the right and no one is in the wrong. It's tangled. And some of it we're still knotting up and other bits we're undoing. I'm mean, I know. :)

I don't even know where I pulled The Raven from, it just came to me and oddly made sense. And as for the ring? Yes, I might be trying to kill you. I've always thought that line would be amazing to engrave in a ring.

Thank you for your comment!

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darthtofu September 4 2011, 22:49:09 UTC
This is so beautiful in a sad sort of way. ;___;

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stilettoxmafia September 4 2011, 23:04:51 UTC
Ahw thanks!

I promise it will won't all be so bleak. It's just happening that way, for you to understand the important bits. Its all about context...

Whenever I look for chapter sections, I try to make sure they aren't all sad. It's oddly just falling that way. Then I feel bad!

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